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It all comes crashing down

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Aight a was bored

Shit man a cant deal with this pain no more
Before yaw try ta reason wit me ama walk out this door
No comin back now im thru wit you don’t wanna hear your stories
A thought you loved me dang a wish I new better that to trust you
Youre nothing but a scheming lying good for nothing dog
Wish I could’ve have seen thru u but I was blinded by loves fog
A had to walk in on you and her ta actually realise tha truth
And now im runnin out the apartment screamin RUTHLESS WERE THRU
Run into the elevator and press the downward button just in time ta see you runnin
See you run after me sheets wrapped round your waist man shoulda seen this comin
Jump in the elevator quickly but the sheets have become caught
As soon as the elevator goes down the sheets go up
So you stand there pleading wit me and I just can’tA help but laugh
You’re the fool now standing there without your underpants
Ten the most frightening thing happened, the fuckin elevator froze
I didn’t dare look up at you just kept staring at ma toes
Silent tears fell down ma face as I kept picturing you with her
Ma mind was running over time trying to figure out how she got there
You caught me crying and tried ta hug me tried to wipe the tears away
Anger rose and I pushed you from me, but then the lift began to sway
I heard a snap and the lift banged against one of the walls
I was scared shitless as I foned them up…hurry up were gonna fall
He tried to calm me down but see ma worse fear b lifts
And on top of that im stuck with the last person id wanna b wit
But we got talking and we figured out some shit I think
But the more and more we talked the more that fuckin lift did sink
On opposite sides of the lift we stared at each other and darent move
Then I sighed and said aight come here I forgive you Ruth
At hearing this he ran towards me picked me up and laughed
But all that moving and jolting made that lifet begin to crash
We were falling so fast that I began to hold my breath
I knew that if I didn’t do something wed only have a few moments left
So I just hugged my boyfriend tightly and hoped we wouldn’t hit the ground
But as we held each other in our arms…it all came crashing down


totally 100% fiction

DAMNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN YO SICKNESS IN THAT BUT U BATTLIN MY BOY BLunt...LOL

Ama vote on this.....when blunt drop his verse

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lol... I'm in yo... It's all comin' crashin down on this gurl.. atleast she ain't have a narrated story like the guy last week.. damn.. good luck pledge..

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my music crashes down like twin towers.//
comes collapsin' on top like sins power.//
I begin' louder, but as the beat fades out
I'm in a cowards position, I need the flow.//
tha crash of tha hi-hat and thump of the bass.//
fans in their place, need to be rhymin' on stage.//
instead I'm blinded by hate, comments destructive.//
facin' rupture to my foundation, fallin' down;//
how'm-I supposed to come up with; new shit.//
thinkin' it's useless, clueless to my superiority.//
like I'm sub-human, inferiority pulls at my self-worth.//
I can't even count on myself to give help words.//
if help works, why am I still spiraling down-wards.//
it can't sound worse than it is, it sounds better.//
the thing is, how it sounds is still a crumbling endevor.//
stumbling over, an' fumbling measures in bars.//
immunity an' respiration crashes down like I was infected with SARS.//
tha pressure's so hard, pressin' on my temples.//
stressin over levels of revelations before it's too late.//
elevation achieved before I reach fate,//
take heed to snake dreams an' tag-teams.//
I'm in store 4 great things.. unless..
it aLL comes crashing down on top of me....

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uppin' 4 votes..
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I'll return favor
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not even one vote yet... why this gettin' so fuckin' slept on...
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mad sleepaz this go around Blunt, i dont have tyme to state my opinion and actually vote ri now, but no doubt i will hit this back up lata, stay real ,peace, 1

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<center> Soft Focus</center>

"I'm stuck with...what i'm Stuck Wit, cause i don't Suck Dick" - Jadakiss

well that was a totall waste of time..........no one voted.......damn sleepers.....summat should be done about that *moans

tha breakdown:

pledge of panther: score in verbals= 6, rhyme scheme= 5, wordplay= 7, storytellin= 9, final score= 27

blunt-mc: score in verbals= 8, rhyme scheme= 8, wordplay= 7, storytellin= 5, final score= 28

this was close as shit, thats probably why most peeps havent been votin, its easier to vote on battles that arent close, i feel that blunt-mc won, but barely..............i liked tha flow, panther

Nyce battle, stay real, peace, 1 luv

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<center> Soft Focus</center>

"I'm stuck with...what i'm Stuck Wit, cause i don't Suck Dick" - Jadakiss