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Ra Ill 0 0%
NuclearConcepts 5 100.00%
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Old 06-15-03, 07:17 PM   #1
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Ra Ill (2-0) vs Nuclear Concepts (3-0)

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Voting ends Sat.


10-30 lines
No highlighting
No quoting
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Any violations will cause your last 4 lines to be deleted

 
Old 06-16-03, 01:17 AM   #2
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Does italics count as highlighting?

just so some of these idiots can tell where the actual wordplay is?

and i'm going 10
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Old 06-16-03, 02:43 AM   #3
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ok im not wasting anytime to get another win .. even though you'll probably no show.

level 3.0

if you dont get the wordplay, ask before judging

He's ......

..as lame as the rest, leave ya brains on ya chest when i'm sprayin the gauge..
and don't you think its ironic your leavin with a record the same as ya age?!?
Choked with a wire, i'm winnin this shit, i'll leave you smoked in a fire
Said you were ill, but i'll slap you backwords ...we all know your a lliar
Get beaten and choked, ya breathin easing while i'm squeezin ya throat
I'll hang you from a school roof just to teach you the ropes!
..leave you sore from haiku's, AI? I storm through high crews..
I'd hand you an L ... but it looks like you already got 2 more than I do

So when..
..i'm aimin at ya arms with both of my 9's, then let this hoe taste it
i'll leave o's in ya chest, so from afar you really represent ya location


done with you.



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Old 06-16-03, 03:56 AM   #4
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get rid of those explanations...

I'm just warning you cause there is only 3

(think about his location)
^^^

all those need to be gone
 
Old 06-16-03, 06:03 AM   #5
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Old 06-16-03, 06:27 AM   #6
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...Ive been in the game longer then you
and I’ll go through-ya-object... / Couldn’t
think of anything fresh so he names
his self New-Clear-Concepts / You see
he only went 10 bars cuz he couldn’t
stand-a-chance / I’ll rip this poor boy so
hard that I’ll have his glands-in-my-hands /
You see your punches are played, And
your bout-to-get-slayed / If this is your
day job, Textceein, Then I doubt-you-
getting-paid / Watch me hit this bitch,
Your going on my rip list-like-this / Tried
to be dope, and diss my name well I’ll
get this bitch hit-with-fist / Whats your
Christmas wish, You want anal from
gay-men / I can tell by the way you
write you were raped in ya play-pen /
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Old 06-16-03, 01:46 PM   #7
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I can't edit my verse, or I would . Even though thats kinda gay, since most people won't know he's 21.
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Old 06-16-03, 10:00 PM   #8
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yo i was relly feelin ra ills verse son. MAd nice. This was a straight battles

punches-ra
multies-concepts
metas-concepts
wordplay-ra
structure-concepts
originality/creativity-ra
flow-ra
overall vote=ra
 
Old 06-16-03, 11:21 PM   #9
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^bullshit. must not have gotten my punches .
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Old 06-17-03, 02:21 AM   #10
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Concept came with a great begginer and closer..

He stayed on point for most of his verse, I give it a 6/10

Ra was okay, some okay punches..but nothing amazing

Ra deserves about a 4-5/10 this wasnt the best battle.

Vote goes to Concepts
 
Old 06-17-03, 02:21 AM   #11
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Concept came with a great begginer and closer..

He stayed on point for most of his verse, I give it a 6/10

Ra was okay, some okay punches..but nothing amazing

Ra deserves about a 4-5/10 this wasnt the best battle.

Vote goes to Concepts
 
Old 06-17-03, 02:24 AM   #12
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^I think theres a couple punches you missed too.

Damn I wish you fags wouldnt have taken away the explanations.
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Old 06-17-03, 10:20 AM   #13
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Not Much to Quote..In My Opinion Yall
However, Concepts Got This Battle..
Dope Opener, And At Times Fell Off..But Held On.

RA, Your Shit Just Wasnt Hard Hittin Meng..
Some Punches were cool, but that's about it..

Overall This Battle Was Wateva, But Hey..It Is What It Is...


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Old 06-17-03, 11:19 AM   #14
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^bullshit. must not have gotten my punches .



dawg don't even worry bout that. It didn't go in the poll. I aint gotta enuff post(ps ps i am Criminal intent) so i did understand ya punches
 
Old 06-17-03, 01:55 PM   #15
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i don't think you did, but okay .
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