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Topic...
Destiny

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Well well well just tryin to get a 100
Oh yeah checkin in, ummmmmmmmmmmmmmm
Destiny..............................
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yo, it's tuesday, but I'm checkin' in now.. I was maaaaadddd sick yesterday, well I did too much coke on sunday an' was too sketched out to do ne-thing.. lol.. 1

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a'ight... I guess I'll do a quick verse right now..

destiny is something that you can't control.//
plans unfold and fold like they weren't supposed.//
ta ever happen, like me never rappin'.//
I'm tappin' my finger for a beat an' creatin' magic.//
this my destiny, it's your habbit.//
you may want fame, but fate wont let you ever have it.//
with black clothes an' a black lether jacket,//
you'll never hack-it, imagine a skid could get in to the industry.//
instantly you'd be beaten an' crushed to smitherines.//
like dust from distant dreams, mushed off alcoholic listerine.//
can't even get OE, 40 ounces of alcoholic desire.//
an' alcoholics aspire to be great before they retire.//
in tha game people change they face an' they clothing atire.//
loathing being admired fearin' heatin' this fire.//
this ain't destiny it's just dreams an' desires..

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Yo I fell asleep last night an my shit timed out, sorry I'm late...

Yo Yo
How many forks in the road are paved, how many more will be made/
You always lead or follow, but still always look forward to tomarrow/
If ya keep lookin to past then you'll miss the questions asked/
Life moves a little to fast but your destiny is always in grasp/
Yo Yo
And I gasp for breath like air never tasted so good/
While I think of destiny takin place in tha hood/
Little ben was 15 an had a brother 4 years older/
Dispite the age difference ben was much colder/
Mike was like Its destiny for me to rock a mic/
But ben spoke like I'm a rebel makin shit right/
Ben acted gangsta and crept with his crew/
An mike wrote in pages like he didnt have a clue/
Both brothers unknown the talent they possess/
Also had different dreams of bein personal best/
Now heres where the story really commences/
Mike kept his mind clearer than windex cleansed lenses/
An little ben smoke blunts crack an meth again an again/
Well they argued about ben bein a druggie an thuggie/
But mikes mind is older so he talked like ben wore huggies/
(Chorus)
Well one day on a walk to the gas station "destiny" was waitin/
Behind the counter an mike walked through tha door sprayin/
Many lyrics in which he was obsessed but Destiny was impressed/
And told mike "Am I wearin a bra, or panties jus well just guess/
Cause either way your cute and you got talent to boot/
I get off a little after two whatever you wanna do is coo dude/
Mike jus smiled for he's never seen apreciation for his style/
Started pitchen a tent an told Destiny "It'll be worth your while/
Well mike left but on the other side of town there ben was goin down/
Hangin with thugs twice his age, gettin beat in to the gang/
Ready to show manhood an unleash rage but he felt strange/
Knowin what hes doin is gonna be screwin up his whole life/
But on the other side of town his brothers gettin inticed/
(chorus)
Bottom line on this destiny shit, two brothers bout to get hit/
Mike took "Destiny" out on a date, an quickly started sexin/
Not knowin his destiny's to get sick if not usein protection/
the last thing on his mind it what he felt was his fate/
While he's for gettin about rap his brothers jus too late/
Ridin down tha block at 15 in an impalla thats sea-green/
Ready for street credit an strikin fear into the gangstas/
not knowin his brother lied when said see ya later/
Well I guess it figures, turned the corner an failed to pull the trigger/
So now theres three bullet holes in a 15 year old wigger/
Destiny caught up with both, but theres still a ray of hope/
At the hospital they tell mike give away your blood quick/
Says OK to save Ben but theres one problem he's sick/
So the bottom line of this story is focus on your own destiny/
One brother died a fake G, an the others dyin of HIV/
Both could have been saved, but thats tha road they paved//

T-

(Was technically a freestyle I wrote like half last night but it didnt come out exactly like I wanted it to)
(Oh yeah an tha bitches name was also destiny)

you win... I ain't even try.. I'm done with topicals........ If I could vote on this battle i'd be nice and vote 4 you

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ya t-square was all around better in this... even tho i still liked blunt's
vote=tsquare.... it was pretty good, was on topic but i didn't like the whole thing wit a whole bunch of people
hit up my topic battle