5-8 bars
no dr/c/h votes
30 minutes from now or a no-show
(6:40 is the deadline)
I'll spit first soon

taktik

old..outta fashion keyin on nintendo characta's witta type-writer//
hopin to find a tight-writer, reynolds 'rap' it un-fresh left-over biter//

i feel like i hold nada but da force gainst a level 1 imperial fighter//
i tried to hand u this match, apearantly u need to battle wit moe lighter//

insight..ur verse has nada to provoke excite...hit i jus might//
jet caught up in flight, shit aint right, still stuk on level 2 green course ...excite bike//

outta rythme, outta sync, outta flow...rather not get bizzy on da mic' wit u no moe//
tricks i dun fuked em, but peeps like u the type dat try an take home da hoe//

lyricle slo-moe, fo-sho, CJ hit hard, betta off wit moe respect as a no-show//
Ur verse couldnt be sold to a homo, in december witta nada butta bench to shield da snow//

13-3 from T-dot but G...hit dat shit i think ya missed a spot//
da spot ta keep it hot, couldnt do it if i pre-nuked ur pot-for-drop//

ya flopped..fish outta water but u jus been-outta-bowl//
pampered in-life, neven ridden hard times, neva had ta pay a toll//

i chew dis Kat...taktick like skoal//
dun even botha poll, i kreep 5-0 like ima mole//

'gimme a break' gimme a break' dis kat bak-wards nada but a 'kitkat'//
dun need a slogan CJ still break ya like hogan on steriod multi-ultra-fit packs//
tik-tok clock run out bout ta break ya bars like monsta trucks on stripped cars//
feelin ill-like sars//
chocalate filled witta crunch, but i aint even fellin ya..prefer hershey' mars'//

lol that was a tight verse
good punchlines
nice flow
lets see what Taktik got

hit me back
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=60641

yeah uppin or dat nigga tactik.................
hot verse carson jet (the vet).........................

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KAUTIOUS

PhSyCoLoGiCaL LyRiCiSt

you made 10 bars??? Dun worry, I'll spit 10 too............................................... .................................................. ....................................

sorry...i didnt really count...my bad....

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i like tatix verse it was hot
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ooo shit my bad
i thought that was tatix
my bad son i didnt mean that
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KILLA TIME........

Pierce ya "nostrils" with "hoks n' rope" on the back of my "speed boat":::: go 0-60 in seconds let's only hope that you eat listen to "Sam" and can "follow~ya~own~nose"// (froot loops....)


My scripture~lyrical, imitating physical, like spiritual ghosts :::::: you couldn't even find "shitty~hockey~players" to "hit~up~your~posts"//


Your words sour like brine, lines'll intertwine round ya "spine" :::: rip out your pelvic~base, you hesitant when it comes to "BACK-in up ya rhymes"//


Put "salt" and "pepper" to ya words, eaten ya "soft" shit for lunch:::: then I'll spit some "battle verses" in a bag n' show you how to "pack~a~punch"//


Battlin you for fun, your wordplay is "lyrically handicap" :::: if I was the "mod" you wouldn't only get "banned" from the site, I'd ban you from all of rap//


Your rhymes lame, like "broken paintings" I'll "break~ya~frame"::::: take~your~name, "CARS-ON-JETS" like droppin "Caddies" on the NY football team durin the game// (your name jus doesn't make sense???)


I'm spittin fleuries, so basically your lack of judgment is blurry::::: so when you accepted, your "text" turned "white" in fear in a hurry//


Your rhymes like a "infinite~lullaby" they "eternally~put~ya~ta~sleep":::: mind left devastated, thinking easy win outside elite//


My vibes will vibrate, I'm irate, bars I state ws 5-8!!!:::: but you spit 10, shit, to know me, you'd need to be my "blood" to really relate//


I'll creep through in stealth, aim 4 scalps, diminish health:::: this site for "emcees" not "editors", take ya shit to New York Times they could use ya help// (don't edit ya shit without explanation man......)

aiight never mind keep that verse
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Even though I can't vote i'd have to say that Taktik took this one but not by much. This is one of the best battles i've seen while on this site. Both had good flow but Taktik had some better punches.

Invisible Vote: Taktik

This Battle was Close , really close , Tik Tak had better Personals and Punches , Carsonjet had Nice Wordplay , But Tik Tak had Better Multies , Close battle , But I vote Tik Tak

WHY YOU CALL ME "TIK TAK" FOR MAN??? Oh well.....thnx for da vote, UPPIN 4 VOTES ppl, leave ya link and I'll give you a honest and true vote..........UPPIN DA VOTES!!!!!!!!!!

good battle...uppin
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rather lose like this than beat newb's all day