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no crew votes dick riding etc

TakTiks verse

People pay admission, recognition since I've been lyrically christened//

But you jus a punk, don't make the cut like "hemaphrodite circumcisions"//

lyrically kill you off da boards, not banned, jus unlisted//

your rhymes from the past (pre-wrote), i rap in present kinda like I'm gifted//

I'll show you naval operations and leave'ya as ya in SUB-MISSION// (sub= submarine, mission=operations)

Time I leave'ya like broken wieghts, as the "weight" itself is shifted//

First elite battle was shit, yet "slung" back from "death" like a literal "miracle~whip"// (miracle=from the dead, whip=slung back to earth)

You die tonight, Fgee, your name lacks letters like a "retard" filled in for "Vanna White"//

Ya rhymes "half~assed" like a "plumber" who decided to wear his "undies' tight"// (It's utterly noticable...)

"Drop" shit like anvils, mad~skills, scramble ya words like a game of de~voweled~scramble//

Take the "wind" from ya body, essentials useless like unpowered~wind~mills//

Your rap skills, sorta like a "fat bitches tits", utter n' sadly "revealed"//

The most "acidic flow" you had, was when your "orange juice spilled"// (citric acid...)

My lyrics like "bullets" cause they sometimes come out in "riddles"//

My start and end don't "hurt", cause like a "short" boxer, my punches hit ya in the "middle"// (middle of my spit...)

mine.....Fgee


its no wonder ur shit....mario lays down your beat
try to cheat?i take out the cartridge.....and bit by bit control your defeat

like retards double dribbling....it's the only time u get blown
he begged his parents for dough....went to the hoover dam...ohhh if only he'd known! < think about it

called your crew the executives....but ur not on top of shit
saliva hit the screen when i told him to spit...the warmest you've come to an RB hit

in his name u get a tik tak and a kit kat....but taktik ur verses still aint sweet
a drop incomplete....thought u were paper view...by sittin on a box seat

as if things couldnt get sicker....he thought we were goin out when i said i'd dump him (body)
now a trash master!not a has bin...black bagged flesh with a permanent grin

watch acutely at the wackness time line....tak's always half passed it (acute=90 degrees)
fuck that! he crossed over when he started....seconds after his finger clicked and the mouse parted

i hate bein a snitch....but his taktik was to pay me to drop late
wanted to stay 13-3 was it worth the wait?....heres the fourth L u fat fukin middle weight!


voting commence......

this was a decent battle....Fgee went a little easy on this dude but this sealed it in my eyes

'in his name u get a tik tak and a kit kat....but taktik ur verses still aint sweet
a drop incomplete....thought u were paper view...by sittin on a box seat"

vote= Fgee

Yo why the fuck you tellin me to "eat a dick" when in actualilty you took four fuckin days to make these lines when it took me like half an hour??? I ain't goin be sayin you shouldn't win but let's say if I had 4 days to make meh shit then that would be a FAIR battle, you got way more time then me man. You really should be called on the no-show but I dun really care right now as long as you show up. UPPIN 4 VOTES ppl leave'ya link and I'll hit ya up wit an honest vote PLZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!

BTW.....all these recent "tik tak" and "kit kat" lines are more played out than "momma" jokes

ive never fukin seen seen that shit.....^
u think i was taking four days to do the verse?
lmao....i did it yesterday when i had some spare time
ive already explained why i didnt drop late anyway....thats just the way it was
its the longest ive taken to drop...ever....
any way uppin

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uppin 4 votes............................................. ................honest and true votes and i'll hit you back

aight this battle was pretty good... both had some decent punches n all... but i think fgee took the punches
flow had to go to fgee too, he included mo multi rhymes

fav. punch... same as irrelevanc's

hit up my battle against d'cyde... it's tight
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=60634

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this was a decent battle....
i liked fgee's verse more, better punches and personals...- taktik's was ok but a lil disoprganized and didnt felt it asd much as fgee's...
good battkle.. vote: fgee

now please hit my battle vs Sandman/Intigator...
its been there like for 2 weeks..

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...78&pagenumber=2

Vote - Fgee

You Can Tell His Shit Is More Elevated...Had Nice Punches And Personals Dat Were More Co,plex Than Taktic's...Taktic Had A Nice Verse But Fgee Had The Better Overall Verse...

(Will Taktic Get The Loss Because His Name Is Spelt Wrong On The Poll?)

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