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XL4REAL 5 62.50%
COMPLEX_MANTHRAX 3 37.50%
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Old 07-05-03, 12:49 PM   #1
THE_COMEDIAN
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XL4REAL vs COMPLEX MANTHRAX

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10 lines max
you spit first
no editing your post
 
Old 07-05-03, 12:52 PM   #2
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Ok dude here we go!!!!!! UK!!!!!!!!

checkin in i'll spit after ya!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
Old 07-05-03, 01:08 PM   #3
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I SPAT FIRST but this kid spat 20 lines instead of 10 so i repeated my verse below and added 10 lines to make it fair,,, read mine first to keep it fair for him also... peace

Last edited by THE_COMEDIAN : 07-05-03 at 01:56 PM.
 
Old 07-05-03, 01:38 PM   #4
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I spit against you with your own elements//
I'll crush your style like 100 elephants.

Thunder, lightning, rain and showers//
I'll use them against you until your pushing up flowers.

I heard in your into weird shit your talking kicks in your messages//
I heard you a freak smelling shoes for fetishes.

Well you gave me that line when shell toes you be talking//
I'll shove my size 12 so far up ur ass in your mouth i'll be walking.

You think your complex, na your simple//
I'll squeeze your brain through your eyes like im squeezing a pimple.

You couldnt absorb my skill, you gonna get beat up manthrax//
Cuz your about to get bloody soak it up like a tampax.

I twist your set up back around against you//
You so dumb you dont realise that I just dissed you.

I heard you got mad dirty s.t.d.'s//
After all manthrax your half a disease. (manthrax = man + anthrax)

The other half (man) you think you can be//
Never, cuz you replaced your dick with a pussy.

Your rhymes are fake as shit like silicone tits//
Now you've digested my style its given you the shits.
 
Old 07-05-03, 01:45 PM   #5
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you went TWICE OVER THE LIMIT erase half your verse and i'll not call for a DQ................................................ ........its 10 line limit 5 bars
 
Old 07-05-03, 01:54 PM   #6
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I'LL SPIT AGAIN WITH AN ADDED 10 LINES SEEING AS YOU SPIT 20 AND THE LIMIT WAS 10

I come armed-with-berrettas to harm-the-trendsetters///
I slap down your lyrics put my palm-to-your-letters///
Ya pits-stink, ya-spits-stink, its instinct ya mad-at-me///
You write like the Bee Gees and your flows a fuckin ‘Tradegy’///
I spit quick sporadically; MK fatality///
To want to battle COM ain’t dumb its insanity///
The only grip you got on this battle is on ya shell-toes///
That post is more of a waste (waist) then where my fucking belt-goes///
I can’t write with pens I’m so hot the fucking felt-glows///
I’ll melt-those shell-toes turn them into sneaks with velcro///
My spits so thick its get stuck-in-tissue///
This punch line could miss and still fucking-hit-you///
I corrode-you-with-chemicals coz your ode-was-so-terrible///
I wipe the smile of your crew; leave you solo-hysterical///
You mean-to-cuss-me? need speed-to-rush-me///
You won’t like me when I’m mad; I turn green-and-muscley///
I’ll slaughter ya-order and kidnap ya-daughter///
You could have her back for one night but you still can’t afford-her///
 
Old 07-05-03, 01:57 PM   #7
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wot you on about mate? youve got 12 lines in there too?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
Old 07-05-03, 01:59 PM   #8
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YOU HAVE WRIT 20 LINES, there are two lines then a space then two lines then a space and so on, i only wrote ten so i write ANOTHER ten to be even with YOU
 
Old 07-05-03, 02:02 PM   #9
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good battle and close battle on both ya parts
Xl4real had a good finisher, but Complex was more consistant
complex had good multis and wordplay and what I think is important, better vocab
by the way, Xl4real, that half man half anthrax shit had me laughin, good shit, but Com still won
vote=Complex Manthrax

check out my battle http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=63437
 
Old 07-05-03, 02:44 PM   #10
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thanx dawg much appreciated, uppin for votes............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ....
 
Old 07-05-03, 02:57 PM   #11
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Good battle you two. I just started postin so i cant vote yet but i think complex got this one his flow was dead on. Xl4 had some good punch lines but the flow was a bit off. Great battle
 
Old 07-05-03, 02:58 PM   #12
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THIS IS A HARD DECISION, BOTH VERSES WERE GOOD, PRETTY GOOD PUNCHES BUT MANTHRAX FELL OFF AT THE END AND EXCLUDING XL'S LINE LIMIT I THINK HE TOOK THIS BATTLE
MAYBE IF BOTH VERSES WERE EVEN IT WOULD HAVE MADE A BETTER DIFFERENCE FOR COMPLEX
VOTE-XL
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Old 07-05-03, 03:01 PM   #13
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This was a very close battle. But I'ma have to give it to the man with the better punches.......XL4real. A good majority of his punches were funny as hell, while Complex your punches flowed well but they just didn't seem to connect as hard.

Vote = XL
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Old 07-05-03, 03:55 PM   #14
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thanks for tha props............................................. ......................... just uppin for votes yall..................ICEBERG420 u didnt poll vote son...........................peace!!!!!!!!!!!
 
Old 07-05-03, 05:16 PM   #15
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complex....

I come armed-with-berrettas to harm-the-trendsetters///
I slap down your lyrics put my palm-to-your-letters///

that's a good ass start....

Ya pits-stink, ya-spits-stink, its instinct ya mad-at-me///
You write like the Bee Gees and your flows a fuckin ‘Tradegy’///

meh, that's alright I guess

I spit quick sporadically; MK fatality///
To want to battle COM ain’t dumb its insanity///

ok

The only grip you got on this battle is on ya shell-toes///
That post is more of a waste (waist) then where my fucking belt-goes///
I can’t write with pens I’m so hot the fucking felt-glows///
I’ll melt-those shell-toes turn them into sneaks with velcro///
My spits so thick its get stuck-in-tissue///
This punch line could miss and still fucking-hit-you///
I corrode-you-with-chemicals coz your ode-was-so-terrible///
I wipe the smile of your crew; leave you solo-hysterical///
You mean-to-cuss-me? need speed-to-rush-me///
You won’t like me when I’m mad; I turn green-and-muscley///
I’ll slaughter ya-order and kidnap ya-daughter///
You could have her back for one night but you still can’t afford-her///

the rest was ok, the whole verse was alright but not great

now XL....

I spit against you with your own elements//
I'll crush your style like 100 elephants.

complex's open was better

Thunder, lightning, rain and showers//
I'll use them against you until your pushing up flowers.

that wasn't too shabby, I kind a liked it

I heard in your into weird shit your talking kicks in your messages//
I heard you a freak smelling shoes for fetishes.

that's just silly

Well you gave me that line when shell toes you be talking//
I'll shove my size 12 so far up ur ass in your mouth i'll be walking.

haha, that's funny

You think your complex, na your simple//
I'll squeeze your brain through your eyes like im squeezing a pimple.

You couldnt absorb my skill, you gonna get beat up manthrax//
Cuz your about to get bloody soak it up like a tampax.

good stuff good stuff

I twist your set up back around against you//
You so dumb you dont realise that I just dissed you.

I heard you got mad dirty s.t.d.'s//
After all manthrax your half a disease. (manthrax = man + anthrax)

I think this dudes winnin, let's see....

The other half (man) you think you can be//
Never, cuz you replaced your dick with a pussy.

Your rhymes are fake as shit like silicone tits//
Now you've digested my style its given you the shits.

ok, both these dudes verses were alright, they both had some good lines in their stuff, I liked complex's start, but I liked XL's whole verse better than complex's

vote: XL

bye
 
 


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