u kno the rules 10 line max
no crew,dr, hatin
or long ass barsssssss(meanin u'r bar goes pass the 2nd line)
half is the mark
also verses due hour after thread post....

peaceeee

chek innnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn nnnnnnnnnnnnnn ...my badddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd

yoooooooooooooooo................................. ......i've been in convo fo alittle sorry yo............i'm gonna spit soonnn...and i'm changin due time.....to 50 mins later then wut i said........aight...1111111111111111111

yooooooooooooooooooo i gottta restart my comps fuckin uppppppppppppppppppppppppp...i'll be back.....sorry..i'll post...and u just post after...1111111111111111111111

yooooo

u'r the wackest i seen, and i aint even seen u...
wuldn't wanna be u-believin u'r true's-a bleedin of youth...
crack dis nigga, i fucked u'r mom constantly...
obviously, u'r chance of bein sick's-to follow sodomy...
i'll eat u like broccoli, with a whole of chedda cheese...
dun't have to say u blow-u'r verse-is a dominant sneeze...
rockin it i come obnoxious, seek the soul's been drop kicked...
stop it, and pray u hit hunts point-fo a hot bitch...
unlock it, u got no key not even to a locker...
to think u got hiphop downs, like carrot top-bein proper...

oneeeeeee

yo...i gotta go to work...i'll get you my joint after i get back...get at me....peace....................................... .............................

checkin in...i'm on a break...so i will do what i can right now............................................... .................................................

actually yo...i won't even try to drop it right now...i will definitely get atchu later...sorry playa............................................. .................................................. ....................................one

aight dawg..............i'lll uppppppppppppppppppp ittttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt....so u can seeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.........oneeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

constant hit this shit up dawg....


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...7722#post597722

yo...i'm checkin in now...here i go................................................ ..........................................

yo...my bad...i'm checkin in right now...got caught up in some other shit...yo...give me a half hour.............................................. .................................................. ...................................

you're a 22 year old bitch, tryna beat this young mind:: but your lines suck a dick, this battle's a waste of my time/
all it takes is a few lines, a few rhymes from my mind:: you can't touch any of my lyrics, cause my brain and soul are aligned/
that means you in some shit, no way to evade my wrath:: your record is 12 and 26, mother fucker, you do the math/
clearly, you lost, way more than when you won:: defeats twice times the victories, and that's without the pun/
you are either in college, or have just gotten out:: i'm on a higher pedestal, and you're going to lose this bout/
you're 22 years of age, but you still can't spell, "wuldn't":: go back to "Hooked on Phonics", you disgraced all "illy" students/ (illy is where he's from)
why must you be "CONSTANT"ly reminded that you blow:: your rhymes are simple and you lack necessary flow/
i didn't ever say that i had "hip hop downs":: but you obviously think you're tight, sorta like when "carrot-top" clowns/
your system is down, it seems your mind is nonexistent:: now you know that in this game, you should probably stay consistent/
actually you have, but mostly in your bitch ass rhymes:: so when you write another spit, actually think, and take your time/

u took a pretty fuckin long time...to put that damn verse uppppp.....and u fed off my verse too much....wtf.....next time post quiker...wuteva....uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnn