HellRaizor vs BROOKLYN

Requirements:
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10 Lines Maximum !!!!
20 minutes to drop after I drop, not a second more!

Rules:
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No Bitin
No Feedin
No Editing
No Bitching
No Building
No Countering
No Hate Votes
No Crew Votes
No Freeposting
No Vote Swaying
No Newbie Bullshit
No Default Vet Votes
* .:!3 Wins Or More To Vote!:. *

Other:
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5 Consecutive Votes Is A K.O.
5 Total Votes Is A Defeat

Comments:
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OK, CHECK-IN & AGREE TO THE RULES THEN I'LL DROP

checking in and agreeing to your rules good luck -1- .................................................. .................................................. ......................

damn champ its been 15 mins. if you can post early post early dont have me sittin here waitin .................................................. .........

SORRY FOR THE HOLD UP, I PLAY IN A ONLINE POOL TOURNEY, HAD TO FINISH THE GAME

HERE WE GO..
*Focus*

After I Shatter Your Frame a 'Bundle of Sticks'll' Be Left, You’re an Obvious-'Faggot', like Technical Difficulties on Movie Sets, I'm 'Stopping-your-action', Rocking-with-passion/1
I'm Tired of this Dude, Raizor Got Me like Plagued Clinics, Man My 'Patients-is-dyin', I 'Compose' like a Mystro, but I Love Playing-with-'Violence'/2

I'll Kick Ya Ass Now Dont Be Dumb, Have You Throwin up Skin and Laces like Steve Young, Stomp Ya Chest and Gut till My Knees Numb, Kick Knowledge While Steppin on Ya Cerebrum/3
You Could Vomet in My Eye and I Still Wouldn't See Your Sickness, Knock You Unconcious with Balled Fist, Throwin Ya Skeleton in a Dark Pit/4

Ya Rhyme’s Is like a 'Tought Decision' I'll Have to Sleep on It, No Avoidin My Rhyme Rapture, I'll Crack Ya Forehead & Give You a 'Hairline Fracture', Get Ya Spine Slashed for Bein a Wack Rapper/5
this Bouts like 'Trick Candels', Theres No Way in 'hell' Is this ‘Raizor’ ‘Winnin this match’!, Ya Shit Never 'Gets Spun' Yet its Still Gettin a ‘Scratch’/6

I'll Detach Ya Tare Ya Spine out from Tha Side and Tie the Knot like a Groom and Bride, the Only Time You Rip Shows Is When You Dispose of T.v. Guides/7
You Might as Well Perform at Haunted Houses, its a Given That You'll Get 'Boooed', I Would Tell You to Kiss My Ass but this Cowards Probably Prude/8

I'll Crack Ya Crown While Spittin Tragic Nouns I Pack Massive Power, Blastin Cowards, Ya Lines So 'Plane' They Could Crash in Towers..Ya Styles Too Weak, Mine Is Fouler/9

im just gonna give you a quick 6 bars which equals twelve lines oh and if you dont understand the vocab and your a vet dont vote

aight that was nice i guess its my turn to rip this is gonna be 6 bars with equals twelve lines

the kid raizor is nice with the flows dont ever forget tha name,
im ill enough to stab you in the head wit a fork just so i can say i picked ya brains//
i know its complicated to you how i come up such coherse lyrics in my own mind, the way break this kids back wit my rhymes he should stay gettin fucked from behind//
like ginuwine this kids lyrics consist of love-making and rough sex, call it what you want the way my rhymes rip through his weak flesh//
you gettin raizor at his best fierce rhymes have you always lookin, this kids real identity is under his turban stop tryin to rep brooklyn//
like the super mario bros. all your good at is unplugging things, but your rhymes make you sound soft like your afraid of bee stings//
i hope you've learned ya lesson that your not even on my level, cause im ill enough to carve a cross in ya head and let you be blessed//

thats twelve lines count em up good luck lets get these votes poppin -1- if it means that much ill shorten it but i dont see how it could when all your punches were in paragraph form

LoL At Those Rules...No Beef People

HellRaizor ~ Came Nice...Just Fealt The Flow Was A-Little To Plain
Punches Were Str8...Nothing To Mind Blowing...I Didn't
Understand Where They Was Going

cause im ill enough to carve a cross in ya head and let you be blessed

BROOKLYN ~ Flow Had A Better Stucture To It...Punches Were
Better...Came Harder

Raizor Got Me like Plagued Clinics, Man My 'Patients-is-dyin'

You Might as Well Perform at Haunted Houses, its a Given That You'll Get 'Boooed'

Ya Lines So 'Plane' They Could Crash in Towers

^^^The Knife In The Back

Vote ~ Brooklyn

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my vote goes to Brooklyn, jus simply his verse was better in this case. Hellrazior's was better but he didn't come his usual best. Its all good though. Brooklyn nice punches and wordplay. Nice vocab too. Good battle to the both of you.

vote Brooklyn

brooklyn your gonna win, im not even gonna pay attention to this battle anymore and im not gonna ask for a rematch thats just not me you won plain and simple. wasnt best by a longshot but you got me so ill see you around

-1-

Brooklyns verse was ill vocab punches all came hard.....
Consistency and structure wasn't tha best but verse was still dope.....
Brooklyn took multis and got way with harder punches too.....
Hell's verse was iite, but punches were good... but jus' didn't seem to come as good as Brooklyns......
Close battle though.... both came hard.....
But multis vocab and punches from brooklyn jus ova powered tha otha kats verse

My Vote = Brooklyn

For soem reason i can't vote in eltite front lines......
If ya know why can one of ya PM me be much preciated............
........Pce.......

hit this up for me: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=62142


like the rest, and hellraizor, said: this one goes to Brook for an overall better verse. Brooks was just more complex with better wordplay and punches. Hells was simple and plain.

vote=BROOKLYN

close shit dawg.. from both of you , but for every punch
Brook just came a lil stronger than Hells.. props to both
none tha less

Vote - Brooklyn

Be sure to hit this up when its completed.. thanks
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=63375