15-25 LINES
NO HATTEN
NO CREW VOTES
SPIT WHEN U ARE DONE

just "checkin in" right now. hey starrboy..... do i spit first or do you spit first? holla back!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ayo MC-Viet ill battle u nxt ok dawg

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U SPIT FIRST
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here's my spit

When I blaze I ~rise~, 'till Satan is visible in my eyes//
Makin' you ~choke~ on death ~ropes~ 'n die//
You jus' anotha ~hoe~ on this defeat line//
Carve ya ~life~ from ~stone~, like a dumped kid at a ~prome~ night//
There aint no ~weapons~ of ~choice~, yo only path is suicide//
Im'a leave ya wraped in ~foil~ like a mummy still ~moist~, ~coiled~ from fear, like "Royce~ when he visits ~detroit~ fo' da mic//
I ~creep~ on you like ~death~ in ya ~worse~ dream//
'N ~leave~ ya wit' mo' pain than ~torn flesh~ in a ~murder~ scene//
Like a ~vampire thursty~, my ~desires~ are always blood worthy//
~Better~ ~surrender~ or ~burst~ from ~hurt~, be Satan's ~servent~ emcee//
Take da ~defeat~ 'n ~curve~ yo ~injuries~//
To prevent ~further bleed~, you can't block da ~source~ of this evil ~force~, attackin' fasta than herpes//
~Versin' me~ is like wearin' ~red~ 'n ~flirtin'~ wit' an ~unfed~ bull emergin'//
This ~fluid~ was ~released~ in ya ~head~ causes mo' ~deaths~ than da ~disease~ "E. Coli"//
Hittin' on ya as your ~chokin' rhymes~, now we're ~talkin'~ vibe//
Yo chest is were my bullets are ~focused~, blazed from a mic//
As a ~matter~ of ~fact~ when ~aids heard~ my ~raps~ it rushed to ~first~ aid//
Because ~ they contain~ a ~cursed flame~, and cause mo' damages than a hurricain/

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haha..! i see how it is, starrboy. alright here it is.

I'm the illest MC in RB
that'll rip your fuckin ass like pile of sardines
Before you even spit I'll leave ya swept off your feet
beat your ass down, and shove you up a cow's ass cuz that's what you eat
I've heard your raps before, you sound like a bitch
lookin at your own reflection in the mirror screamin', "I got a zit!"
but fuck it, I'll get rid of it for ya by suffocating your face in hot water
while your getting strangled to death, saying you don't wanna
Your style is wacker than an MC losing 20 battles in a row
cuz your being played out like a CD on repeat without the flow
I got everything in front of me, the money, the hoes, and the dough
You don't got shit, farmboy
Yeah I do talk shit around your back while your face is down
I'll make you kiss the pavement, make you lick it and ask you "Does it taste like the rainbow" cuz that's where your ass was on the ground where you were found
I'm feeling good giving you a kick to the chest and an upside-down frown

Alright, sorry man myspit was waaaaaaaaaayyyy late. welll... anywayz, uppin for votes and feedback now!!!!!!!!! lol..

COME ON PEOPLE LEAVE SOME VOTES

LEAVE ME A LINK AND I WILL CHECK IT OUT
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UPPIN
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HOLLA
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COME ON PEOPLE
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StarrBoy, Nice Wordplay....Took this with every concept. Nice job. Mc-viet, Just elevate man, yours was real good too, just that Starrboy came a little harder. No beef man. Keep it real.

Please return the favor at mine, Poll votes please...
Heres the Link

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=63965

THANKS DAWG MORE VOTES
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Hey Starrboy, can yougo bakc to my battle and poll vote please. HTanks...........................i appreciate your vote.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ..................