10 - 15 lines
no feeding
1 round

you spit first dawg

Okay....CheckN in .................................................. .................................................. ..................

I'm spit this double feature in the theater after I pull blood from this "creature"//
InjectN ya wit needles in the bleachers is the riddle that will defeat ya//
Ya couldnt get a win if ya attached an undefeated record to ya text//
I rip ya set-with-a-single-claw and place a bet-like-a-final-call that unstoppable when I shock ya to ya draws//
I stay quick on the ball...You a dick that slow at the draw...ShootN blanks at this call//
I'll slam you into a glass wall....Shatter a piece to stop ya shield N cast ya fall//
I'll knock ya from south paw...Stop ya mouthN off cause this ya struggle aint nothN//
I'll spit ya teeth in half...Backwards dash into ya bash yourself on a mat from the fact ya wak and NothN//
Ya act is buggN....I tie a gas mask to your lyrics and begin to nuke ya flow....
It incredible how much edible dick this rapper sucks...Ya rap like a hoe that has a cock embedded in her bone//

::aiight check it::

Watch me as I Rip “ RIPallthat ” slit his wrists with spit on tracks/
I’ll knock him across this earth with a quick hit then spin him back/
I’m liftin this kat so high he’s playin with mach-jets-in-motion/
RIPallthat couldn’t battle he plays a lot with cocks-wet-n-lotions/
You talk a lot but cant seem to walk cause I leave you frozen/
I cleave your body parts open then freeze tha whole thing/
You hoping Im not that I’ll, but now u know Im a dope king/
Sit on my thrown while I smoke an O’ and blow an O ring/
I torture you with matters deadly like the old Chinese republic/
My audience loves it, when I battle my fine speech erupts kids/
RIP throws more Tricks than a dog-doin-back-flips,
you try to surpass this?
I run so far ahead you'de have to jog-movin-fast-kid!
Leave you confused like retards doing taxes/I give you hoes jaw practice when I cum hard like hoes on my mattress/Dawg u aint bring one remark that’s smart-verbal-calvalry/ So watch as I spark tha heat like a charged-thermol-battery/

some votes please!........................................... .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .....

some votes please!........................................... .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .....

aiight this battle looks like it was written on some other program...pre-writing...but it doesn't say not to in the rules so WHATEVA...here' the breakdown

Streetlegend takes it by a touch in all catergorys...wordplay, vocab, punches but the flow seemed smooth from both...1...

vote=streetlegend(close battle)

MA BAD...wtf am i on...wait don't answer that...sorry i must of got you RIPALLTHAT confused wit streetlegend for the way you name typed up...sorry... anaylsis still counts but on ripallthat...1...

uppin this...can we get some accurate votes up in here??............................................ ........................

uppin this.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .........

this wasnt really a good battle but this is the breakdown

personals-divine
punches-divine
flo-divine

vote=divine

devine creature gets my vote, good flow and better word play, rip all this was good harder punches.

I vote devine creature!!!

Can you guys go vote on my battles fair so I can get them out the way and battle again!!!

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=62812 yo vote no show on this battle and I'll hit this back

up for some votes............................................. .................................................. .......

As soon as I get enough posts, I will vote on other ppls battles

Hmm tough one,

im thinkin rip all dat just got dis, better flow n structure

plus i digged his punches more

Sum fair votes is needed on dis piece anyone readin dis
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...6068#post606068


Peace