Ok 10 lines max
no hater votes
no crew votes
no friends votes
constructive critism only
BOTH SPIT NOW!!!!

xl or decreased do either of u wanna battle? i'll set it n spit first n u reply sometime today?11111111111111111111111111111

Deceased your as shook as the walking dead::I'll compensate for no brains with a shot through ya head.
Your a zombie to me no balance, no precision::I'll seperate your limbs from your body with a lyrical incision.
Your eyes stare on from your lonely shell::A lifeless carcuss your soul destened for hell.
You chose your own path when you stepped against me::You would get killed if you werent already deceased.

I heard you the grim reaper of this rapbattle shit::Even with your sickle your spits dont cut it.

How can you write when worms crawl through your eye sockets::Maggotts infest in your ass you cant spit shit with the blockage.
Lets face it your gonna need a face lift::Cuz your face all melted and youve had all your brains picked.
Not very atractive with all the body fluids you be spilling::Just like when you was a kid with your bed pissin.
Your ears bleedin your trying to think with no luck::The blood is quagulating and your thoughts are stuck.

Basically you aint shit to me, im out::Im reincarnated as you, its your eyes im looking out.

Bit of a weird verse from me, not really a major diss but theres some freaky shit in there ha! ha!

Im a newb, but i got u more shocked than ur first pube
in a pool of urine seeing Vs deceased, no worse news
im well above you, cos ur lyrics are poor and your punches mild,
theres no denial, this retarded MC was beaten with a mic as a child
He talks shit, like the man on the park bench, begging for cents
Theres no evidence of sense in the verses he dispense
your game is weak, 6 - 16, you'll be the first on my streak
as soon as i speak, uve reached ur peak, the fall aint steep
U'll soon learn to fear to deceased, with the words of hate i preech
faggot, learn that rears are no go, ur 25 on the net, ur careers in slow mo
Uve been put to shame, do ur self a favour and dont show


er thats it...................first battle....decent stuff there Xl

deceased ur shit was a bit wack homie

u needa up ya vocab n structure big time

XLREAL ogot this pretty easily

XL hit dis wit a fair vote, Peace
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...6068#post606068

xlreal got my vote 4 far .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ..............................

good job xl4real u murked him like shit. yo if ne1 is up for a battle im willing. so lets go and make me a star~

xl4real got my vote. tight new style dawg, some real improvement. u had good flow, and some creative lines. deceased wasnt too wack for a newbie but was simply outclassed.
vote- xl4real

return the favour
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...6146#post606146

xl poll that vote against confusion n i'll giv this a fair vote straight after!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

x u got u had better every thing
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1st up guys

uppin for some votes to win with my quotes cuz that other guys rhyme is a fucking joke!!!!!!!

Only messing kid no beef!!!!
vote dis shit!!!!!!!!!!!

uppin guys come on show me sum love!!!!!!!

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2nd up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

yo x4real gets my vote by betta punches, poll vote-x4real
yo x hit this battle up right quick and poll vote for the best verse, dont forget 2 poll vote aight, thanx
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=64229

xl took this no doubt, nice new style dawg u elevated alot since i last read your shit, keep goin 4real---nice!
vote=xl

can u vote on my battle wiv jshook, down 2-1 but tight battle, giv n honest vote plz!