10-15 lines
no dr/c/h votes
no feedin
no 'return the favors'
honest votes permitted obviously

i spit first but i warn my lines are long, it's jus how they come out on text.....brb wit my shit

Taktikal Productions Brings You......No Common Kerdezzy

My mental-Taktiks hit like semi-auto-matics, judge looks at my 'evidence', bedazzled at the lack of motif for action//(jus to merk...)
Take-that-son, good verses...you lack some, kinda fun 'flippin'~you~cats' like 'Garfield' was sittin on 'fractions'//(ya flip fractions in math equations)
Text haults ya breathin', like kids wit 'split~personality' on 'Halloween' evenin', your ass is 're~treatin'//(no trick....haha)
Your only link to 'Jesus' is I send back your verse for your 'last supper', throw it down and watch-you-eat-it//
Your rhymes get defeated in tregedy, your flow, punches and structure we're posted sadley//
'Scare' your text, even the board tries to [/b]walk[/b] like I took a glock to 'milton bradley'//(Monopoly...Scare Milton Bradley, Scared the Board-walk)
Defy amplifiers, despise fakes~n~biters, you'd need a 'rictor-scale' equipped wit 'nerves' to 'measure~my~violence'//
Screen~heats ya iris~n~eyelids, knuckles~up like i'm Irish, everytime you key a word it's 'shit' sorta like an 'anti~Midus'//(Midus touch...turn things to gold)
You try and match key words till you wrists~hurt, you couldn't 'make~fun~of~shampoo' for your words to properly 'diss~PERT'//(dispurt...Pert Plus shampoo?)
I'm like the '8th Dwarf' named 'Eemcy' cept I be signin' at you 'whistle~while~I~merk'//(whistle while you work...haha)

Until next time.....keep on breathin'.....that's if you can

ight... taktik... havin to explain everything haha.. it's cool

ight... get it kickin get it kickin... back up fo this 1...
*go to sleep beat starts kickin*... cuz taktik is gon' go to sleep

kerr heaves taktiks heat into operations to your "teethe" leavin you "gums-free" n your mouth to-be "de-breathalized",
openly-"eat"-your-intestines, accidically-burnin-your-mind, n visciously "nibblin" away at this bitch like "pesticides"

i'ma stand victorious "period". no commas needed cuz you "dashin" on a "red-rriver-run" flowin "un-controlably" soon to be weakened,
you replace apples into-the-"pie" so you can get a "piece"-of-your-mind into your family talks but get emotionally "mis-treated"

kerr's might has you disabled to "roc-a-mic", only way you could achieve this task is to sway "back-n-forth",
this "herb" is replaced from a body "bag" into-my-"pipe", like the "irish" he applies-"lucky-strikes" against my "pro-testing-force"

even biting "legends" couldn't make your fables "sacred"...i'ma "mumify" n place you into the basement cuz "pyramids" is a place fo the "greatest",(me!)
breakin him down into "fazes", i'll discombobulate what's left from yo brain cuz like an "ecmee hannibal"... you've been "lyrically-aten"

crushed-like-a-"can", peer-"pressured" him to take it like-a-man but he got his whole crew to witness his-last-stand,
i'll "blow"-you-up like "swollen-glands", couldn't stand them to expand so i "surgically removed" it on "pay-per-view" cuz you gon' get "de-maned"(indemand=payperview channel)

*finishing touches applied wit personal/punch*
you "swing blades" to pro-claim that you have "fans" n be considered "cool",(blades on a fan... keeps cool... fans.. haha funny right?)
you could "spit flames" to say your "on-fire".. which is ight fo me cuz i'll let the flames get higher and in hell be-side me you can have a stool

ma stand victorious "period". no commas needed cuz you "dashin" on a "red-rriver-run" flowin "un-controlably" soon to be weakened,
you replace apples into-the-"pie" so you can get a "piece"-of-your-mind into your family talks but get emotionally "mis-treated"
dat was heat....nice battle to u both...taktic..u had a nice intro bad midtro ya outra was clean...but decent all around...kerr had better euqipped punches feellin it..

Damn Hard Battle
Hard Ta Decide
both had a good verse
aight imma break it down

Vocab=Tie
Meta's=Kerr
humor=Tie
Talk=Taktik
Punches=was close but kerr stood out a lil bit

vote=kerr.

NO HATE

nice spit yo, UPPIN dis shit rite here, leave a link for an honest and truthful vote, UPPIN 4 VOTES PPL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

tight verses yo, these are the kind of battles we need more of

yo props taktik... 3-0 me... but it's still a tight battle
uppin this bitch here... must respect on this battle here
probably my best spit

great....i had to fuckin battle you when you had your best verse?!?!?........jk........very nice battle, once of the best shows i've had i think ever on this site

^that's all i got to say too, nice battle, all around from both of you.

haha... *kerr grins*, i'm startin to feel respect now...
thanks man.... lol i normally drop a lot better against good competition

yo i think taktik got this he got good punches

peep my battle yall 2

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=64932

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.TCS.

kerr brought more creativity with this......tha pyramid line...tha fan line...couple otha's and thats what can change my mind on a vote so due to creativity on this shit ima give it to kerr

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=64883 could you hit this up if you have tha time?
thanx