10 lines
he spittin first
no d/r hate crew you know the shit

aight-chekin in...
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Whyte-Ave

whyte ave-yo he be from E'town-finna CRoss a Carson' Beat-down//
dawg keep ya feat-down cus i dun even need to hit-up my sweet nouns'//


Yo...i refuse to push more then 6 barz cross-weak-emcee-herma-phrodites//
feel my fist-filled wit words-a-might-cross me hoe?-ima bout to rip dis mic'//

so chek it.....yo......
Like britney u dun crossed da wrong roads'tween newby breakdown an elite fast-lane//
my shits-insane-like luci' i spit in-vane-'break-outs poppin vessl'd veins-u's bout to wrath'r my lyrical pain//

warmups dun....les go....
U want me to spit-first?-or reverse-dawg i got u str8 swirvin dunno-which-way ta turn//
fuk wit me-i spit arson-on thee-fuk third degree..ima send str8 to ya urn fulla-burn//
internaly bleedin-from dese signs i posts wich u providin adherin wit no heedin//
like a parade i stomp-my post-impedin- send u to court-ur verse ofcourse-dey want divorce-dey simply pleadin//
bitch...keep on readin
Cus u kno dis match-im leadin-leave ya dusted tryna feed-it-str-off mah spit//
git-nada butta quik key-hit-turnin lyrics like a im flipped fit-but u came ill-equipped trik//

yo checkin in, I'll have my verse down in a bit
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aight check it

“I hate everything about you”, its true, clear up your rhymes, they like a “Puddle of Mudd”/
My rhymes come at you like 50 foot “Tidal wave”, hittin you so hard your screen will “flood”/
Every “bomb” you been droppin just been a fuckin “dud”/

This like a game of “poker”, I “call” and finalize the “bet”/
My “spit’s” a “flush”, he a “high pair”, a fuckin “bluff” is Carsonjet/
Time to “fold” cause “your table” jus gone “cold”, “odds” of you beatin me, is smaller then winnin a “jackpot” lottery/
Bitch take up something you can succeed at, dancing or pottery/
If you was “Harry Potter”, still wouldn’t have enough “magic” to win/
Act like “Bilbo Baggins” put on your “ring” make yourself “invisible”, disappear and join Bin Laden/(Bilbo puts on his ring and goes invisible)

aight lets get some votes

aight-votin time peeps.........
lets get dis shit dun quik aight....
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Vote-CarsonJet

Better Flow And Punches And Wordplay...White was Good But Wasnt Enuff...

But Good Battle...

carson had some betta punches cuz half otha dudes was bout poker and then tha otha half was bout books and hobbies.......carsonjet took it..........hit this up http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=65150 thanks

basically i agree but a nigga cant poll vote so just count my shit, 1luv.

i vote carsonjet betta punch lines and harder blows hit my battle up and let me know what yall thank of my cuzo http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=65392

aight uppin this shit
post up a link and I'll vote on your shit.
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heres ma link dawg http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=65318 .................................................. .................................................. .

^^^^^^^^^^^uppin
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Vote goes to carson, I was feeling his flow more, the use of words and punches was overall better to.

vote-carson

NO SHOW
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...9575#post619575