Hey 10-15 lines
No d/r votes
no crew votes
no hate votes
You spit first i'll spit shortly after

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The Creation

so heres the way
none of yo niggaz got shit to say
rymes keep coming off like a toupee
plus im big headed smoking crack and doing things my way
a selfish man
the back of a hand
we slapping the hell out of hoes because i can
prostitute
give me your loot
and i dont givea fuck about your broke ass man
you givme what i need untill bitches give me the meaning
you fuck with me
i fuck woth you
you encouraged motherfucka fuck them too

haha check

You come to me wit wack-ass lyrics like that and see what happens you'll get slapped//
I'ma make ya shit yourself when u read this spit you'll be one one more rapper i capped//
Take off your hats Tha Remix is about to mix up your face and confuse your brain//
I'm tha big dogg of this rap game you like a fuckin poodle and i be tha great dane//
You must be insane fuckin' out of your mind you ain't got tha skills dogg u ain't got tha rhymes//
Now it's merking time i ain't even gotta try it ain't that hard battlin' this newbie guy//
I'm only on my 7th line and u can't believe ya eyes but i know u can't be surprised//
You stepped to me i'm a lyrical king and if someone told u that u had a chance then they must've been high//
But keep up head and try to elevate i'm not tryin' to hate i'm just tryin' to say//
Check your work and take criticsm work on it everyday and maybe you'll be as good as me someday// haha maybe not!

good luck

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Respect is all I'm after.
Prime effort is all you can expect.
Perfection will be promised in time.

The Creation

*shakin head* 20 my man u need to elevate..another nice spit remix...nice punches and an overall good flow .


vote - The Remix

uppin uppin uppin on this shit

uppin' in herrrrrrr......................................... .................................................. ..

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Respect is all I'm after.
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Perfection will be promised in time.

The Creation

dj a word of advise stop rappin

dude didn't even have to spit to get votes

vote=remixxx
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BITTEN!

That son is taken directly from the song "Pimp Like Me" by D-12 WORD FOR WORD...Swifty McVeigh says this:

Well Imma State My Name., SWift McVeigh//
Any yall niggas got shit ta say//
My rhymes keep coming off like a toupee//
IM a big drug dealer, do things my way//
Selfish man, back of the hand//
Slapping the hell outta hoes because i can//
prostitute, i want my loot//
And i dont give a fuck about ya broke as man and...


BITTEN! I WILL REPORT THIS PERSONALLY

whoa thanks for noticing man............................................... .....................................

__________________
Respect is all I'm after.
Prime effort is all you can expect.
Perfection will be promised in time.

The Creation

hit dis up wit an honest vote and i'll return da favor
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=66128

return tha favor?...................dogg he bit off a verse and you're not suppose to say anything like that just drop tha link after tha vote

__________________
Respect is all I'm after.
Prime effort is all you can expect.
Perfection will be promised in time.

The Creation

uppin'............................................ .................................................. ............

__________________
Respect is all I'm after.
Prime effort is all you can expect.
Perfection will be promised in time.

The Creation

uppin'............................................ .................................................. ............

__________________
Respect is all I'm after.
Prime effort is all you can expect.
Perfection will be promised in time.

The Creation

uppin'............................................ .................................................. ............

__________________
Respect is all I'm after.
Prime effort is all you can expect.
Perfection will be promised in time.

The Creation