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View Poll Results: Who won this battle?
Knuckle~Head 5 100.00%
Phrantik 0 0%
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Old 07-14-03, 01:59 PM   #1
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Phrantik (0-0) vs. Knuckle~Head

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8-20 LINE Maximum
Check Ins : TUESDAY
Verses By : THE END OF THURSDAY
No Biting, D/R, Recycling of Any Kind..
**Every person must vote on three
regular battles, and two out of the three
championship battles. Post your links in
the page designated for them in the LLL
Office forum. Make sure to post your five
links on only one page (edit).

Good Luck!
 
Old 07-14-03, 02:02 PM   #2
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watch me rip your intestine out through your naval.
*wait*
i havent battled in close to a month... besides live
*do i still have the textcee edge*
BAHHHH!
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Old 07-14-03, 02:06 PM   #3
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haha i'll rip ur intestine out thru ur mouth and make u slurp it back up...
*o wait*
i haven't battled anybody worth tha effort in 3-4 monthz...
*do i have it in me to actually try?*
BLAH!!!....
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Old 07-17-03, 02:48 AM   #4
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Tik here, to cool down the atmosphere
So lets close the windows and end knuckles career
This computer nerds right, he aint got what it takes to try
Cause he got more balls missin than a mysterious pop fly
For the second time in your life you’re in a crew with me
And for the second time in your life you’ve seen popularity
so Like a bad circumcision I’m cutting this dick down
Cause with only 8 lines I won this round.
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Old 07-18-03, 12:32 AM   #5
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aight...

This Thread'z A Waste Of Space Like Most Of Phrantik'z Postz...
Damn Phrantik'z Perfect! Sike...He'z Not Even Close...
You Got Merked By 13th Disciple, Wait! I Thought He Wuz Wack...
If That'z Tha Case Then Skill And Perfection Iz Wut U Lack...
Tellin Newbiez Liez, Tha Last Thing U Are Iz A Legend...
If Tik Wanted An Example Of Imperfection, He'd Jus Look At Hiz Reflection...
This Kid'z A Super Mod Dissin Tha Site Constantly Commiting Treason...
He Thinkz He Matterz Cuz He Followed Everyone To Rhyme N Reason...

fuck it i'll match urz and leave it at that...
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Old 07-18-03, 02:06 AM   #6
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This was a short battle
Not really much effort was put into this
but Knuckle~head got this one in my eyes
If ya'll would put ya all into it
this would of been a really hard battle
but oh well keep ya shits up!
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Old 07-18-03, 04:12 AM   #7
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once again a verse with no word play
is winning. rb is a fuckin shame.
good flow, no doubt but add word play.
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Old 07-18-03, 04:43 AM   #8
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Tik here, to cool down the atmosphere
So lets close the windows and end knuckles career
This computer nerds right, he aint got what it takes to try
Cause he got more balls missin than a mysterious pop fly

no...


For the second time in your life you’re in a crew with me
And for the second time in your life you’ve seen popularity

wak

so Like a bad circumcision I’m cutting this dick down
Cause with only 8 lines I won this round.

verse was weak as hell...punches were weak and lame and barely existent at that...

knuckle


This Thread'z A Waste Of Space Like Most Of Phrantik'z Postz...
Damn Phrantik'z Perfect! Sike...He'z Not Even Close...

blah

You Got Merked By 13th Disciple, Wait! I Thought He Wuz Wack...
If That'z Tha Case Then Skill And Perfection Iz Wut U Lack...

smh....

Tellin Newbiez Liez, Tha Last Thing U Are Iz A Legend...
If Tik Wanted An Example Of Imperfection, He'd Jus Look At Hiz Reflection...

man...get creative...all this weak,played mess

This Kid'z A Super Mod Dissin Tha Site Constantly Commiting Treason...
He Thinkz He Matterz Cuz He Followed Everyone To Rhyme N Reason...

this battle was incredibly weak,..good thing it was short...
knuckles closer was at least decent...nothing in phrants verse appealed in the least....

vote= knuckle
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Old 07-18-03, 10:45 AM   #9
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This battle was really weak. Neither put effort into it and it wasn't good. Good that was short. Phrantiks verse was weak and Knuckle head atleast some decent things i.e his closer. So I basically say word to the post above me.

Vote=Knuckle
 
Old 07-18-03, 11:08 AM   #10
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Quote:
Originally posted by Phrantik
once again a verse with no word play
is winning. rb is a fuckin shame.
good flow, no doubt but add word play.


^i didn't need to try so i didn't add tha wordplay lol...

lmao @ peyo...u shouldn't talk...i've posted no show versez that wuz better than tha shit u've posted in ur battlez...
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Old 07-18-03, 02:45 PM   #11
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Tik here, to cool down the atmosphere
So lets close the windows and end knuckles career


^^Thats the best line in this whole battle and frankly this was dissapointing as fuck with these two vets...even tho phrantik hd that one good punch, kunckle head at least came consistently...

vote= Knuckle Head
 
Old 07-18-03, 07:35 PM   #12
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This Thread'z A Waste Of Space Like Most Of Phrantik'z Postz...
Damn Phrantik'z Perfect! Sike...He'z Not Even Close...

^ not bad
You Got Merked By 13th Disciple, Wait! I Thought He Wuz Wack...
If That'z Tha Case Then Skill And Perfection Iz Wut U Lack...

^i don't no how to take this as......but it was aiight
Tellin Newbiez Liez, Tha Last Thing U Are Iz A Legend...
If Tik Wanted An Example Of Imperfection, He'd Jus Look At Hiz Reflection...

^decent
This Kid'z A Super Mod Dissin Tha Site Constantly Commiting Treason...
He Thinkz He Matterz Cuz He Followed Everyone To Rhyme N Reason...

^it'll work


Tik here, to cool down the atmosphere
So lets close the windows and end knuckles career

^seriously cheesy
This computer nerds right, he aint got what it takes to try
Cause he got more balls missin than a mysterious pop fly

^not feeling it
For the second time in your life you’re in a crew with me
And for the second time in your life you’ve seen popularity

^i'm beginning to see signs of a newbie

so Like a bad circumcision I’m cutting this dick down
Cause with only 8 lines I won this round.

^yeah.........okay.......i guess


basically...this battle was pretty dull.......phrantik.....(and theres
no beef in this)......i'm just not feeling ur disses or punches
whatsoever.......knuckle.......okay punches.....i know u didn't
really put much effort into it.....cuz i know ur skill level......but in
my eyez.....u still took this.........vote=knucklehead
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Old 07-18-03, 09:46 PM   #13
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NOTICE: Keep voting for knuckle head. no beef with him take the win.

BUT.... at least read this for future battles... cause once again
rb prevails as beign the weakest site for voting.

number one most important thing in a battle:

-punches.
we both had them. we were both equal with them.
but a punch is not strong unless it is connected
with a personal, or a meta or a bit of word play.
that makes personals, metas and word play
more important than flow, and although
flow is appealing and makes the peice easy to read
as long as there is some rhyme scheme then flow should rarely
be factored into a battle, unless of course it is audio in which
case flow is a little more important.
it is very apparent you are all voting for flow, because
if you werent the score would be different.
13th you said you werent feeling my lines, even though
they were the only lines with any bit of wordplay.
so please, factor in all important aspects of a battle before
voting. dont just read them. read into them. thank you.

NOTICE: Still vote for knuckle head. DO IT. i want to show this is not swaying so i will edit the polls so i lose in either case.
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Old 07-19-03, 12:07 AM   #14
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Knuckle~Head Takes This One

Phrantik (0-1) Knuckle~Head (2-0)

Good Luck Next Week Guys..

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