10 Lines / 5 Bars
No crew/dick rydin/hate votes
No feeding/Recycling/Biting
You spit first

i'mma nice guy, but you talk-shit then I DROP-HITS with HOTNESS like ROCKETS//1
This little kid....Fucking 'SENSELESS' like Ripped POCKETS//2

My smallest RIPPLES will RIP-HOLES leavin' ya FACE with extra DIMPLES//3
just SYMBOLS of how SIMPLE I could leave you CRIPPLED//4

Stronger GRIP-HOLD then PITBULLS...pop you like PIMPLES//5
your RHYMES all GIGGLES...MINES harder than bitch tit NIPPLES//6

SMASH-THIS-HATER...no OPPOSIN' my POTENT FLOWS-KID...leave you DOSIN' in some
random O-CEAN//7
you rhmyes RUSTY like CORROSION...at least matchin' the COLOR of your BROKIN'
NOSE-THEN//8

That's ok cause I RIP-FAGS and the GUN-IS-LOAED, so if your gonna SPIT-RAP
invest in a tictac//9
cause I think SHOULD-KNOW 40 minutes AGO ur dad called...he wants you to give his
fucking DICK-BACK//10

yo could u vote on my battle vs da joka its slept on like FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF

lol talk about pre-written..... ill spit in a bit.

This kids Ducking ma Sick lines, switch tha "S" and "D" and this bitch is Sucking Dick 7 times//1
Couldn't "structure" a spit if ya had a Ph.D in "craft & design", kid cant even get into W.E.C, so he phones tha hot-line//2(W.E.C = Wackness Emergency Centre)

Ya names only famous as it struck tha Fox News HeadLine - Only punches ya got is tha ones i shot that left an outline//3
Kid obviously didn't see my Warning Sign, "Stay clear or be homed in a permanent Shrine", your defeated, just resign//4

Ama merk you at a glace, ya probably "pissin-ya-pants" knowin that ya losin even tho you got given tha chance//5
This battles to tha Last one ta stand, am gettin pussy, but yo ugly ass still makin love to ya hand//6

this battles a combat zone, and ama full-blown killer, crush yo poor ass wit ma wallet leavin you in a cold sweat//7
dont get upset, bad enuf yo bitch all wet, had to sort her problem wit a single player version of russian roulette//8

Crime scene labelled with Police-Tape, listen bitch, im first-class, your second-rate, ya so ugly ya cudnt even get a date//9
Noone left to penetrate, get a fag play-mate, anally investigate, all your rhymes translate into one line "i need to elevate"//10

Uppin for votes now.

please shut up prewritten erm no.............how about yours????????????????????????????????????????????? ?????????????????????????????????????????????????? ?????????????????????LOL

Yo G We Need Votes In This Thread http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=66450
Anyway Tha Reality Won This Shit His Punches Were Stronger Xceltiz Came Hard As A Mothafucka Lol But I Tha Reality's Punches Were Mo' Direct And His Verse Flowed Betta .

Thanks..... make sure ya'll poll vote.... ill check ya battle wit honest vote crash.....................
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no comment.....about that comment just upin 4 votes............................................. .................................................. ........../

Both verses were tight, Xceltiz was pretty strong with punches, but reality came stronger, fave line was the WEC hotline one, funny shit, so vote going to reality.

thanks for vote dawg.............
Uppin this.

Real come on msn ThugzDoCry@hotmail.com i need to talk to you ...........................
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what you 2 guys talking about its fucking n00bs voting look at this wack verse Crime scene labelled with Police-Tape, listen bitch, im first-class, your second-rate, ya so ugly ya cudnt even get a date//9

it makes no sense no worldplay out of line punches

this was quailty SMASH-THIS-HATER...no OPPOSIN' my POTENT FLOWS-KID...leave you DOSIN' in some
random O-CEAN//7
you rhmyes RUSTY like CORROSION...at least matchin' the COLOR of your BROKIN'
yo xceltiz im gonna pm you im thinking about making a new crew

xceltiz=vote for good worldplay that made sense