Have by then end of 2day to post or DQ

No line limits... but remember if its 2 long it can get wack



~TOPIC~ = Drugz and life's hardships

*This has been set out differently..as it is a topical battle i did it creative.... the 1st line rhymes with the 3rd... and the 2nd rhymes with the 4th ... have fun reading lol*

.::StoryTime::.

A Local Upcoming Star Is About to Make His Mixtape... He Is A Counscious Artist and Tries not to Be Distracted By the Violence And Crimes Going On In His Projects.... He Puts 100% Into His Music.. So His Girlfriend And Baby Mother Is The One Who Provides For Them (B4 He Gets To Stardom)

He Never Did Like To Sing, He Liked To Rap Now
Hopes Of Accomplishing His Dreams......................
He Never Did Have Patience, He Liked The Fast Route
Strong And Confident Kept Good And Clean
.::Ready To Make It::.

He Never Did Move Alone, He Liked To Be Near Those He Loved
His Girfriend's Hand Held Tight In His Palm.........................
He Never Did Get High, He Liked The Buzz Of Love
Made His Mixtape With His Baby By His Arm
.::On Cloud Nine::.

He Travels Around The Country For 2 Months Giving His Mixtape Out And Finally Sending It To A Label

"Honey Im Hooome I Missed You So Mu......"

He Never Did Want Lies, He Liked The Deserving Truth
He Returned Home And His Girl Was Being Boned.......
She Never Did Want To Cheat But She Liked Flirting Too
No Real Income At 19 He's Left To Raise His Baby On His Own
.::Trys to Hold It Together::.

He Never Got Drunk, He Said He'd Like to Keep His Brain Cells
But With No Income Or Food And Constant Baby's Cry's......
He Never Thought It Would Come To This, BUT He DIDN'T Like Living In Hell
He's Starving With His Girl Gone..... "Jus One Blunt... Il Try"
.::Corruption::.

He Never Followed Orders, He Like To Make Them Up
But Desperation And Peer Pressure Does Not Mix.......
His Friends Never Gave A Fuck, They Liked To Blaze It Up
Gave Him Cocaine And Told Him "Get Your Mind Right By Taking This"
.::Straight Stupid::.

He Never Knew About Coke, But He Didn't Liked To Cause fuss
His Eyes Red... His Baby's even Worse.. Both tired
He Never Could Picture His Child Having NOTHING, He Went 4 More Drugs
This Time At A Dealership... ........Both Hired....................
.::Here It Is::.

He Never Half Did Anythin He Liked To Go All Out In Masses
The 'Shrooms Were Finished In Five Mins
He Never Did Like When A Beat Stopped, But Now Its A Little More Drastic
As More Drugs Were Popped, His Own (heart) Beat Had Stopped As He Drops
......................... The Phone Rings


...Answering Machine

"Hellooo....

"I Never Did Like To Rush, I Hope Im Calling In Time,
We Love Your Sound and Your Lyrics Are A Good Read..
Its Sounds Like.....
You Never Did Like The Streets, Or Like To Commit Crimes
Your Jus The Type Of Concious Rapper We Need............"
.::Ironic Huh?::.

Be Sensible With This Shit

OutrO

Drugz....

Have The Power To Reach And the Power To Grab
The Power to Teach, To Be Loved And Drive Mad
The Power Itself Is Nothing Special Its Simple
The Power Of Life Or Death Isnt In The Chemical...... Its In You

vote honest on my battle and i'll vote honest here we ya'll done
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=66363


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check....



yo soldier// good spit //


~im starting it now~

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yeah set up our battle and spit.............................................. .................................................. ........................

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Soft focus

Whats the point of living?

The voices in my head Feat. Rule

Unlikely Alias

More Comming soon!

!! Story Line !!
__________________________________________________
He was once a pronoun artist, making his way to the top of the
music charts. Respected by his loving wife, newly born son and
by the whole community for being a true ''hop-hop'' artist. With
sudden fame, brought money. Money brought all sorts of 'gold
diggers' searching for some handouts and anything that this
young male could offer. __________________________________________________ __



::: In the Begining :::

Negitive chants come from his peers in an attemt to shoot him down but he wont let them//
He stays up late reciting rhymes written, tryin to perfect them//
He lays awake. Cant sleep. Cant Eat. Its like my mind flows a continious beats//
A dream, nothing more than than a farfect'd thought untill he put pen to sheet//
Lyrics start to flow, but with more than just a rhyme scheme...
Somthing different...original in thought... sounds like a divine dream....
Negitive chants come from his peers in an attemt to shoot him down but he wont let them//
He stays up late reciting rhymes written, tryin to perfect them//


He's got a One Track Mind... ''success''.... and nothing more//
To provide for his family, sounds like the man you try-to-be
A good role model for his son to admire.. the one who He adors//


::: Stardom:::

With a fresh change to the rap game came a new name and new face//
Life turned from tame to panic, life got frantic .. hard to keep pace//
Couldnt keep his records on the shelfs, the money rolled in//
Times got so good he was wipin his ass with benjamins//
Sparkin cubins with lit Franklins, drinkin liquor in a glass now//
He was living up the rock star life, but things always fuck up some how//


He's got a One Track Mind... ''success''.... and nothing more//
To provide for his family, sounds like the man you try-to-be
A good role model for his son to admire.. the one who He adors//


[/b]:::Crash n Burn:::[/b]

Soon cubins turnd to blunts and the liqour straight from the bottle//
Layin next to his passed out wife, she looks like a crack-whore.. but usta be a model//
Things start to happen, kronic turns to cocaine//
White powder is used to help the so-called pain//
As time passes the money starts to gradually disapear//
His rhymes aint doin shit anymore, he can hardly see clear//
Why would you support a druged out rapper with a strugling career//


He's got a One Track Mind... ''success''.... and nothing more//
To provide for his family, sounds like the man you try-to-be
A good role model for his son to admire.. the one who He adors//



He's got to provide for his family cuz hes the man you see//
So he goes to his source, and gets a phat amount//
Sold the rock point by point, made mad doe yah couldnt even count//
Started to get big... needed fatter amounts still//
Took too much, got jacked... tried to bounce.. got found and killed//


He had a One Track Mind... ''success''.... and nothing more//
To provide for his family, sounds like the man you try-to-be
A good role model for his son to admire.. the one who He adored//



Now this isnt tale suposta be different? It normally dont happen like this//
It starts with the Drug Dealing then turns into another story of biss//
But if you missed the picture... If it didnt quite hit-cha//
Life aint all about Hollywoods happy endings//
Lifes Hardships strike when things be goin good somtimes//
Other times they dont strike, they just rewind//
Play back in yah mind.....................the good ol times...


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lol mad spellin error n shit.. but its hard to see that when u write it in da lil box..


so .. i wont edit.. that will look worse...


good luck --

Aight AC.. good drop... its gonna be close... and you can edit as long as you dont change up the lyrics ya know... i had 2 edit my Bold characters... but i edited b4 u spit so it couldn't have been cheating

good luck!

uppin 4 votes

aiight this is real close...ive never voted on a topical before so sorry to both contestants but ima vote on what i feel...if thats how you do it...

ac your verse flowed well and there were some good views in it about the success thing and a bit n drugs...didn't seem as deep as solders tho...he touched on the hardship of relationships, suceeding, and drugs...ac had better structure to his verse...but going on depth of topics solider takes it by far...no hate and holla if i missed aspects of votin on a topical...nice verses and good read to both of you

vote-solider

ok thx for vote...

And i will keep that in Mind Soldier... but for now i wont edit this battle... i will just not fuck em next time.. lol

i liked this whole battle never really seen either one of u in a topical but its hot

tough vote both were interestin to read...but my vote goes to soldier his shit was deep flowed nice and it didn't rhyme like a bar....hot...plus urs reminds me of someone..wonder who that is lol...

but ac i liked ur shit too the whole stardom part.. nice ..i'd like to see ya'll have another round..but thats jus me lol

wow.. good shit both of you.. cant vote cuz im in tha same crew as soldier.. but just givin ya both yur props.. nice work

Thanx its good feedback so far 4 both of us AC.. i think i needed to improve my rhymes and you needed to improve your depth.. but people were generally feelin both
props

its been a while since i had a battle wher someone wasnt dickryding/hating/biting etc lol you tight and you a real nigga thaz good

*Soldier stop aplauding your opponent*

uppin

ight dogg...

i like battlin against cats like you... even tho i wont eva get teh vote cuz your 22-4 and im 4-5 ...lol


but yo... thx for the props..


(im notta a nigg tho..


im white and high-grade, like coke from coloumbia :: :P