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Due : 2morrow

yo..

finished...
dont sweat-the-technique, this cats like summits of mountains, games already reachin-the-peak...i'd hit ctrl+alt+delete..but first me and his style was hopin-to-meet!// (whered it go?)
he's 'all wired up' like 'electronics botique!'...turnin one cheek, but realizin i wanted to battle sumone chronic, not facin-some-geek!//
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...but i just started...
hit him 'around the bases (basics)' and he's accused of 'foul' play//
read the name....im 'god' and this kid just refuses to 'pray'!//
his future is gray...i predict he will r.i.p. ...and stay where he lay//
even if he tipped the scale at 300...in rap that dont change wat ya weigh// (lightweight 4 him) 8

continue...cuz im bored...
bash ya brain and eat-it, so ill understand the words-ya speakin! spell it out plain in reason and find ways to shame-ya-treason// (im god)
so awkward-a-beacon but blame-the-greedy...this is an obvious loss, try and name-a-treaty!// 12

...beyond doubt like his crew...
blame society, fuck it blame-ya fans...ill have ya whole crew 'sweatin bullets' like they carry 'guns-wit-glands'!//
stunned-this-man, beyond reasonable doubt...
member i made a referrence to baseball?, well ya lyrics is out!//
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..and i aint writin no more cuz i damaged u enough for today, and my 'shells' is for 'shore'// (wrote that for the hell of it lol)


go!

Tunnel-Ya-Vision By Puttin' Ya Body In A "Full Cast" Like "A Hundred-Magicians"/
It's Just Another-Collision, Now Ya Stomach-Is-Twicthin' Worse Then A Nudist In Frozen Tundra-Who's-Fishin'/
Feeble Ya Writin'-Is-Fabric, This Kid Couldn't Be "On Point With Flames even" If He Was "Ignitin'-A-Cactus"/
You Kid Can't Hold Ya Own Weight, This Battle Is Just To Lighten-my-Battle record!"/
I Sense Signs-Of-Tha-Hatred But Realize-Ya-Faced-With Instant Demise-of-Whackness/
This Arrangement Is Mine-For-Tha-Takin', You Like "Depressed People On Holidays"...because you'll "Never Rise-To-This-Occasion"/
I Own-Tha-Throne With Lines That'll Blow-Ya-Dome, You Like An "Arm Amputee"...because uSimply "Can't Hold-Ya-Own"/
Complex Like Roman-Codes While ur rhymes are Simplistic, Your Skill Doesn't "Show Growth" Like "Corroded-Bones"!//
Turn Ya Brains-To-Fossils, Let Me Explain-Tha-Motto.I'll "Pop Ya Top" Like "Gernades-In-Bottles!"/
This Kid's Actin Like he Birthed-Tha-Site, Nah...bash will "Cut Ya Wrong" Like A "Clumsy Surgeon-Might"/
Always Claimin' Ya Verse-Is-Tight...You Like An "Over Confident Zebra", Still Thinkin' Ya "Earned-Ya-Stripes!"//
My DARTS-ATTACK-BLAND-"BITERS", so Imma "raise the stakes" and let u "take it to the heart", like a "CARDIAC-“VAMPIRE"//
Cause I'm the illest DUDE-OF-COURSE whos the ZUES-OF-WARS, got Feeble Minded "looking up to me” like YAO MING in a ROOM-wit-DWARFS//
Punches leave ya like a “newborn baby” cause ALL-YA-TEETH-WILL-BE-MISSIN"/
Feeble's disses catch more SLEEP den “ bodies” in GRAVE-CONDITION"/

upping this battle.
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I'm gonna say this...

Feeble came real good with the wordplay as always...
But this time I think he got too cpmplex for even himself and that softened the shit outta his punches.

Some of them were more like questions than direct disses...
Like ya expected me to explain them to myself.
And, I got them...didn't have a problem understanding anything.

Bash just lived up to his name.

Just as much wordplay, but I didn't feel bogged down by it.
I also felt that there was no roundabout punch style to his shit.

He came straight ahead and I felt his shit hit harder because of this.

So...

Flow...ya both did good but ya both cracked a bit in the upper middle area I felt.
EVEN
Wordplay...again both came with great stuff, but Feeble took this catagory.
FEEBLE
Punches...Like I said, more straight ahead style earn points for...
BASH
Personals weren't really brought into this much by either...
EVEN

So, overall, Bash w/ the punches...

Holla back...Born vs. Wordz

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yo i really dont kno about dis battle this was the best battle i seen so far on dis site but i dont kno i'll be back to vote

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i like bash on this one betta flow and tha punches kept me laughin not a bad battle tho yo could u peep my battle against xtreme flow thanx

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Thanks

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This was a tite battle!!

yo both had ill multies but Bash topped that and pucnhes were tite from both but Bash topped it, Bash hit way harder with punches tho

best two lines were...both from Bash

Feeble Ya Writin'-Is-Fabric, This Kid Couldn't Be "On Point With Flames even" If He Was "Ignitin'-A-Cactus"/

Cause I'm the illest DUDE-OF-COURSE whos the ZUES-OF-WARS, got Feeble Minded "looking up to me” like YAO MING in a ROOM-wit-DWARFS//

No hate feeble your verse was real tite...peace...vote-Bash

oNe

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Feeble Minded u had a nice verse....
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omg..Stop sleeping on this battle..
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