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5 Barz or Ten Linez
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i 'fold' ur 'body' like 'pants to a crease'//
'transfer' ur 'body fluids' out until ur 'body' is 'dried up' and 'deplete'//

remark the last wordz of a killa buried inside me/
'I' have ur 'balls' cut off put them in ur 'eye sockets' so this bitch can 'see'/

about what im 'sayin sprayin' nothing but 'snipers and rifles'/
'barbarically' remove his 'kidneys' and other 'organs' so vital//

'killin u softly' like 'Lauren hill' with these 'words'//
'fuck wit me dog' u be in the 'dirt' with 'earthworms'//

i mutate ya 'body' like 'mutations of chromosomes'//
I put 15 bullets to ya 'head' 'split ya dome'//

alil quick spit cuz i gotta bounce

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Nice Verse Ill drop a fair vote after both yall drop

vote on this please

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=67808

nice verse

can i get some voters on str8 jacket vs twistabill
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Nice vs dawg can I get some votes on this battle below? thanks niggas

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=67515

Herez da rematch, dawgz...

$Bar 1$
Ma "words" are jus' lyrically "absurd"/ ridiculous bu' ingeniously "heard"/ when I spi', I'm da vet, u tha "herb"/ Ma rythmz flow, they fly off like a fuckin' "bird"...//

$Bar 2$
I I spit in ya'll "faces"/ ma punchlines leave ya so metephorically bloody, ya'll need hyperbolic "braces"/ "disgraces" of RB showni' they "racist"/ jus' fo sayin' 'nigga' gets dem a lyrical "facelift"/ tha list 'o katz merk'd worn on ma wrist like a "bracelet"/ Vertz r only honored ta face me, "face it!"//

$Bar 3$
Hypnotic's like a lil' "bitch"/ He's mo fuckin' homo-sexual than "Lilo and Stitch"/ I've killed dis faggot mo times in this rhyme alon, than da Godfather killed a "snitch"/ Hypnotic's jus' a disease, hangin' 'roun like an uncurable "itch"/ Hypnotic merk'd me befo, but I've flipped da lyrical "switch"//

$Bar 4$
I myself got ma rhymes "lifted"/ Like crack, ma rhymez get ya'll niggaz "addicted"/ when I unleash ma rhymes, I unleash da "wicked"/ I've jus' left Hypnotci lyrically "evicted"...//

$Bar 5$
Yo time is up, it's "null"/ I've surpass' ya, yo limit is "full"/ Betta get suckin' now, bitch, 'cause Ima strung like a fuckin' "bull"!//

Good battle, dawg...

UPPIN(1)^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

both wer real tight
hypnotic always comes with some nice punches
gangsta one eally improved from tha last one i read
i was feeling gangstas flow a little more on this one
very tough vote

VOTE gangsta


can i get some honest votes on str8 jacket vs twistabill

Yo, thx dawg...don't sleep UPPIN(2)^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

nice verses by both, but I can't vote cause me and Gangsta One is in the same crew...Gangsta One, drop your verse for the NYG Anthem in our sub-forum.

check out my battle and drop an honest vote

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=67413

Both good

Gangsta out classed Him
in wordplay and dissing

Good battle
vote= Gangsta

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=67246

nice shit from Gangsta...u had some tight ass rhymes homie....and Hypnotic....work on rhyming more...and u'll have this shit down pat too aight....anyway...

Best Line from Hypnotic:
nice shit here....Lauren Hill line was nice...lol....

Best Line from Gangsta One:
ur opener and closer was weak...but ur body of ur verse was pretty ill...nice punches all over...tight lines...and u rhymes mad ass shit...

Overall: i think Gangsta One took this....nothing hard on Hypnotic...just work on a lil' more complexity with ur verses...u nah mean homie....keep the shit up u two...

BREAKDOWN
Multis - Gangsta One
Vocab - Gangsta One
Metas - Gangsta One
WordPlay - Gangsta One
Flow - Hypnotic (Gangsta ur barz are too strung out)
RhymeScheme - Gangsta One
Creativity - Gangsta One
Complexity - Gangsta One
Violence - Gangsta One

Vote - Gangsta One

peace
4:20

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A'ight thx dawgz UPPIN(3)^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

COME ON DAWGZ DON' SLEEP ON DIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!