since you a newb i'll shorten it
10-13 lines
5-7 bars
basic house rules

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drop a verse

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KAUTIOUS

PhSyCoLoGiCaL LyRiCiSt

u spit first i wanna know what am up against fella

soundage will try give yeh a good battle

good luck by the way lad, u will no doubt need it

ay yo peep dis why ya wait ill come back n vote http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...5910#post645910

fuckin hell whens dis fool spittin i think he jus shittin

hes gone and realised whos hes facin god mate u betta be pacen

^ shut up and spit you cock sucking motha fuka!............................................. ....................................... god dam you can run your keys

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KAUTIOUS

PhSyCoLoGiCaL LyRiCiSt

G o b oth of y ou are talkin all fu ckin day spit or shut the fuck up
i wan na see you marges spit

this battle needs deleting this fool dont wana fight now!

eanie meanie minie moe oh yeh its coz his mums a muva fukin HOE

if this battle is happening ur spitting i wanna see how shit u are so i dont waste ur ass too badly

no hard feelings when you lose you shud be used to it by now anyways lol

Natural... you should just shut your trap right now cuz when kautious spits, you're gonna be sorry, that's all i'm sayin, he's typing his verse right now, you should do the same...

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i'll type ma shit up when i see what hes got lad, by the way soz bout all dat shit earlier no hard feelings i hope especialy when i do get round to battling your sorry ass

aight fuck it


[color=green]~It's a disaster... he came natural on lyrics but this kid spittin gayer preeches then a homosexual pastor//

~hitting dis kid with swings, I've already mastered(masters) the win,
dropin em faster then cheep shots connected stright to the chin//

~With a grin im Ripping the skin above his eyes so he can see my up size ,
i 'come' with suprise while killing like rapeists in disguise//

~u could't be lyricaly eqquiped if you had rap supplies,
you'll be looking up at the sky when i capitalize, 'devised' a way in 'disconneting' your rise from your tries//


~U couldn't 'come' hard if u tried, like an impotent retard u lack skill beside your pride//

~Im makeing this 'a short ride', your getting a 'serious' 'collide' of 'crash' and 'burn',
just like your 'cheap lyrics' i'll put your ashes in a 'dollar store' urn//

~While i slash with a verse i open a gash on dispurse, your cursed with a loss droping head first with the only rush of a thought burst to the hearst//

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KAUTIOUS

PhSyCoLoGiCaL LyRiCiSt

aight fuck it


~It's a disaster... he came natural on lyrics but this kid spittin gayer preeches then a homosexual pastor//

~hitting dis kid with swings, I've already mastered(masters) the win,
dropin em faster then cheep shots connected stright to the chin//

~With a grin im Ripping the skin above his eyes so he can see my up size ,
i 'come' with suprise while killing like rapeists in disguise//

~u could't be lyricaly eqquiped if you had rap supplies,
you'll be looking up at the sky when i capitalize, 'devised' a way in 'disconneting' your rise from your tries//


~U couldn't 'come' hard if u tried, like an impotent retard u lack skill beside your pride//

~Im makeing this 'a short ride', your getting a 'serious' 'collide' of 'crash' and 'burn',
just like your 'cheap lyrics' i'll put your ashes in a 'dollar store' urn//

~While i slash with a verse i open a gash on dispurse, your cursed with a loss droping head first with the only rush of a thought burst to the hearst//

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KAUTIOUS

PhSyCoLoGiCaL LyRiCiSt

shit sorry for the ddouble post
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>.................................................. ..............

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KAUTIOUS

PhSyCoLoGiCaL LyRiCiSt

nicee lad im quittin i cant compare to that shit soz lad

im a newbie not fuckin eminem well done u won