im the GOD!!!!the m.c. that cures your illness by force feeding you your medicine-like they do disgruntle senior citizens-alone-inside of a pedioatric home-collect on 1~800 clones-eject they pharomones-disect their monotones-from their baratones-
creating a surgical tool from my micro~phone-then leave your heart monitor pulse a dial tone-upper cut- the number till it rang up-to give you a chance then just hang~up-]

Trying to test CENTZ-there's a 1 in the earths' circumfrence-chance you will survive being
beat dorment~
burried in torment~
in a paolithic circophicus-incoded in hyroglifics-and neo sandscripts-so when you get to hell ASMODEOUS- wont have to ask who did this-

when i flow i here damn!-flow like when GOD cast NOAK'S ARCH and used the earth for a dam-walk on the land,walk on water, walk on sand-the martyr...in my pressence you feel the essence-here the name JESUS!! so much im no longer a man-but an arch angel thinking i was caught fuckin a NUN in the VATICAN-

go back to the primordial man runnin into the wild and wilden-on cannibal freestylen-so in battle you get aste as far as rap im THE MASTER like RAKIMS last album-

the reprint, the 2nd version-my 1st verse born with the 6 th sence in third person-so when i diss your crew- i dont even realize i already killed you-choke you with your own flatline begging dude- to PULL~THROUGH-slice with the percise aim of a hiruku-in the same fashion as a real life rendition of TENCHU-
when the 120bit software- be comes a human clone like the terminator and sirex becoming self aware-BLESS you-like HACH CHU-my ART OF WAR article on beat could son SUN TZU-

seeing my is inprobible-your defence cant hold me back press audible-take it to offence but if your my rival-i rip scriptures with more qoutables the the QUARAN OR BIBLE-your frame's spolied- when you flame broiled-equiped with spit for the retorical mic on-
to tear metaphorical icons-im myself multipled by pie divided into the the last 2 eons-

profound with pronouns-i may get no play but and infintly rewound-murder flow...basically...you die at the drop of a sound-cause if i dont show you love then you aint got nothing for me-i have no time to rhyme. you "dumb fucks"like 2 retards in a group orgy-

stay unstable-with 2 braincells left one KAIN the other ABLE-so when i deliver a HOOK and PUNCHLIN E you get the BEAT~DOWN like TURNTABLES-

HOOK: I MAY OF FAILED GOD-BUT I WONT FAIL ALLAH-
DROP THE BOMB WITH ME ON IT AS A KAMIKOZEE-NAZI-
THE MOST HATED-THE MOST INTRICATED-EDUCATED- M.C.-
THAT SPIT FLAMES TO THE BIBLE TO LEAVE YOU JUDIS INSINERATED-DROP NAPALM ON THE PSALMS WITH EVERY SONG-
TELL ME TO GO TO HELL!IM THE HOTTEST THING OUT SO IM WHERE I BELONG.

also im promoting this for my inspirationto rhyme

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nice work it flowed well very well, intressting concept that worked well return the favor dude http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=68308

^^^ this was deep, the flow and wordplay right throughout this poem is what made it easy to read.

I probably got a total different picture than you did writin this but i supose that what makes poetry!

The way you used religeon was another good point, i'm not religeous but religeon is the cause of most things on the planet eg:- WAR !

Nice piece!

THANK YOU I REALLY APPRECIATE THE FEEDBACK

good stuff....show's vocab skills.......flow was aight........sounds good as it is