you know tha rules but just a reminder 12-14 lines no hate dr crew or feeding you can spit first if you want but if you arent im not spitting until you check in

aight checkin in............spit yo shit......................good luck!!!!!!!!!!!

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yo ima bout 2 bounce right quick and i'll be back in like an hour or so, so i just figured i would let u know u so u wouldn't get all pissed of and shit aight

aight thanx for the inform i'll spit soon.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .....................................

What you mean when you say tha what comes to sleeping men is dreams//
Must not be thinkin right, when dunkin tried to compare with krispy kremes//(yall know dunkin doughnuts and Krispy cream)
Have my verse knock you out and hopefully put you ina herse//
if ya dont die you'll still trip on ya unorginezed fucked up verse//
If you was a car ya wouldnt be up ta par and i'ld rate you with not even a star//
300zx right here dont fuck with perfection and quit messin with tha setter of tha bar//
ima semi-newbie bout ta kill ya vets imunity of ya system with aids//
hope you get nick@nite cuz that would be the only place you see 'happy days'//
like a kick in tha crotch i hope ya got a watch cuz this one cleaned ya clock//
get laughed at like like you were attracted to cats cuz ya verse is tha shitty one at tha dock//
like a tactical shooter in training im startin not ta miss with my diss//
and now your givin my feet a kiss hopin not ta get tha fist but ya dont got flow even like my piss//
leave you crumbled and then bundle ya cryin cuz yo ass stumbled//
they get everything out ya verse like ya when ya took tha mic you just mumbled//


aight no hate just battlin so i dont know when you'll spit but anyways good luck.............peace

aight let me do somethin quick.....

yo..i put pressure on ur BRAIN, so when u lean back, ur back-cracks//
u claim 2 be SICK, cause you beat a couple of wack-kats//claiming that u
pack-gats, !SHIT!, all your packin is wack-raps//THAT'S-WACK!...considering u don't make
sense-to-me//thinkin you've improved, when ELEMENTARY, was the only thing you
sent to me//SEE!....your an ignorant emcee, that claims he has skill//
constantly throwin wordz that !REKOR-SHADE!, like attempting to stab-steel//
my brain consist of illness, unstoppable by ad-vil....or any pill//why you
step 2 a patriot that leaves kats disfigured, and many-killed...//
yo....u could try 2 defeat me, but u won't get close, at all-dog//
your constantly BALL SUCKIN, in other wordz ur a BALL-HOG...//
i'll shoot wit the teck-twice//leavin the flesh on ur neck-sliced!...like
orange-pillings//LAUGHIN!, while ur brain's collapsin, like foreign-buildings//you
spit like ur ignoring-ill-things...COME ON!, you serious//wit that, u couldn't
stop this FLOW, if you were throwin PERIODS...!!!!!!!

flow goes to young he also had good wordplay n aight punches n amp had like ok flow but a 1 word rhyme sheme no multis agghhh soso wordplay n nice punches also but i ffeal that young took this wid more consanst n better flow

i agree with hands, better floh consistancy and pretty much everything goes to young, good battle....

Vote: Young

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young took it by a lil betta punches props 2 both tho im out holla

peep mine
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=67550

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Huh china.

youg got this by a little barely edged him out NICE battle tho young just got ya on the flow and punches

Vote - Young

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