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8-20 LINE Maximum

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Verses By : THURSDAY

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Leave a Pipe-in-Ya-Dome, So the Heat I Hit Is Insulated
I Show Hype-In-Stones.. When My Rock-Hard Lines Skip ya Body Incinerated
U gon Think I was Press-Affiliated tha way I Knock-ur-Stars, N Leave ya Blood Pressure-Grounded
I'm ur Every-Line-Devourer .. So Dis Time I Can Say I wont hit u wit a Punch-But-a killer Bite
Crunch-This-Site, Switch-Ya-Dreams Cuz im a NightMare Like u Was Eatin Lunch-At-Night
Cave-flow gets 'blown up'..jus like the 'metro-dome'/
to Test-his-'Throne-holder', wit a 'sceptor' leavin a metronome/
My logic is like a 'time bomb', I come first and 'blow seconds'-
Fraction caves rhyme with a slope method-
Disproportion your Physical Presence wit you Ass on your Hip and Split you Side-Ways
21 Gun Salute in your Brains , Place 12 Shells in your Cerebral Cortex and let em Scramble-Your-Eggs/
This is Text, he can’t Hear me so his Eyes must be Def , Cave must be missing his hands , because my punches he can't catch"/ (get it , think about it)
But cav'es my dogwhen I Toss the Frizby he does Fetch , but kill him taking PEC out of Respect so he resting six-feet-test
Strap the Seat Belt Over-Your Chest||Put you in a Car and give you the SAT wit no Brain but a Helmet, like this a crash dummy test

Short , but that's all what i could have come up wit.
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Really Who's This Guy Beat? Even The Supernewbs Consider Him - Dumber~Than~Most
Must Be A Bummer~To~Know, Only Way Your Level's Higher Than Mine Is Your - Number~of~Posts
Stick To The Script, It's A Fact Bash Ain't Runnin' Rap; Just Another - Wack~Guy
Yeah, I Heard It's Good To Be Bad But You Shouldn't've Took That Shit - Rap~Wise
Ya Crew Sucks & You're Individually~Worse, But Don't Get So - Mentally~Worked
I'd Hate Make This "Ground Beef" & Have U - Visiting~Dirt
I'm Rippin'~This~Nerd, How's This Kid - Fuckin'~With~Me?
You From The Bronx & Rhyme Worse Than Most - Southern~MC's
"Metaphorically Insane", Yeah Cause The Chance U'll Land - A Line
Are Less Than Fat People Bungee Jumpin' Without A Chance - Of Dyin'
No Hot Rhymes, U Not Nice - U~Fags'll~Learn
Your Name's Bash? Shit, No Wonder It Easy For U - To~Crash~&~Burn
Backtracked Ya Wack Battleraps, It's Not Hard~To~See U Can't - Spar~With~Me
Cause Your Record's Almost As Hard~To~Believe As Ya Bars - Are~To~REad
Keep Ya Weak~Ass~Lines, Bitch, You'll Never - Be~A~Rhyme~Wiz
That's Why I'm Glad To See U Spend All Your Time On The - Feeble~Minded

~Peeeeeaze....

Bash got my vote with Vocab and WordPlay
Cave Canem ya shit was aight
but bashes was way better
sorry man
some nice shit tho

vote-bash

both were good but Cave just in my opinion won this one...
he had good punches not forced wordplay and just overall better.


vote=CAVE

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This was a tight battle...flow and punches was good from both...Ima go with Cave tho his punches more personal and more technical.

Vote Cave

This was a quick verse, Because i'm battling lots of cats , so i'm drained out....
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cave canem you delt with bash fake ass but ima southern rapper i see you talkin shit so get at me youngin I WILL FUCK CLEAN OVER YOU and thats real

ok...

Leave a Pipe-in-Ya-Dome, So the Heat I Hit Is Insulated
I Show Hype-In-Stones.. When My Rock-Hard Lines Skip ya Body Incinerated

Blah.

U gon Think I was Press-Affiliated tha way I Knock-ur-Stars, N Leave ya Blood Pressure-Grounded
I'm ur Every-Line-Devourer .. So Dis Time I Can Say I wont hit u wit a Punch-But-a killer Bite

weak

Crunch-This-Site, Switch-Ya-Dreams Cuz im a NightMare Like u Was Eatin Lunch-At-Night

weak...

Cave-flow gets 'blown up'..jus like the 'metro-dome'/
to Test-his-'Throne-holder', wit a 'sceptor' leavin a metronome/

way weak

My logic is like a 'time bomb', I come first and 'blow seconds'-
Fraction caves rhyme with a slope method-

boo

Disproportion your Physical Presence wit you Ass on your Hip and Split you Side-Ways
21 Gun Salute in your Brains , Place 12 Shells in your Cerebral Cortex and let em Scramble-Your-Eggs/

best punch so far...

This is Text, he can’t Hear me so his Eyes must be Def , Cave must be missing his hands , because my punches he can't catch"/ (get it , think about it)

ok...

But cav'es my dogwhen I Toss the Frizby he does Fetch , but kill him taking PEC out of Respect so he resting six-feet-test

weak

Strap the Seat Belt Over-Your Chest||Put you in a Car and give you the SAT wit no Brain but a Helmet, like this a crash dummy test

pretty weak

Overall A Very Weak Verse

Really Who's This Guy Beat? Even The Supernewbs Consider Him - Dumber~Than~Most
Must Be A Bummer~To~Know, Only Way Your Level's Higher Than Mine Is Your - Number~of~Posts

haha

Stick To The Script, It's A Fact Bash Ain't Runnin' Rap; Just Another - Wack~Guy
Yeah, I Heard It's Good To Be Bad But You Shouldn't've Took That Shit - Rap~Wise

decent

Ya Crew Sucks & You're Individually~Worse, But Don't Get So - Mentally~Worked
I'd Hate Make This "Ground Beef" & Have U - Visiting~Dirt

way to flip the words

I'm Rippin'~This~Nerd, How's This Kid - Fuckin'~With~Me?
You From The Bronx & Rhyme Worse Than Most - Southern~MC's

not a great punch, cuz its a matter of opinion

"Metaphorically Insane", Yeah Cause The Chance U'll Land - A Line
Are Less Than Fat People Bungee Jumpin' Without A Chance - Of Dyin'

lol

No Hot Rhymes, U Not Nice - U~Fags'll~Learn
Your Name's Bash? Shit, No Wonder It Easy For U - To~Crash~&~Burn

WEAK

Backtracked Ya Wack Battleraps, It's Not Hard~To~See U Can't - Spar~With~Me
Cause Your Record's Almost As Hard~To~Believe As Ya Bars - Are~To~REad

not bad

Keep Ya Weak~Ass~Lines, Bitch, You'll Never - Be~A~Rhyme~Wiz
That's Why I'm Glad To See U Spend All Your Time On The - Feeble~Minded

ok..

A decent verse

Vote= Cave Canem

...Clearly Goes To Kanem...

Reason...Being...The Punches..Were Better...And You Throw In A Personal...Also Bash..I've Been Reading Alot Of Ur Verses..You Never Throw In Nething Personal About The Baaattler...Just Random..Lines..That Can Be Directed Towards Nebody..But..Your Verse Was..Still Ok...Kave Just....Took It Away..

Hot Line From Cave..::

Really Who's This Guy Beat? Even The Supernewbs Consider Him -Dumber~Than~Most
Must Be A Bummer~To~Know, Only Way Your Level's Higher Than Mine Is Your - Number~of~Posts

~UnO~