ill go 8 lines, he goes infinite.
he spits first

ayo i don't care if it's me against u
or yo nigga's BACKEN YOU UP

cause when iam done a med team
gone be PATCHEN YOU UP

in yo reply u sound COCKY
now i got 2 beat yo ass
like that guy did ROCKY'S

so stop act'n MAN
4 you get clapped up and
wrap'd up like them TAILIBAN'S
wit twin macs banana's 4 clips in both HANDS

DEZYIR ur not LIKE ME
i'am strapped all da tyme
while u strap yo NKES

i spit hot bars like summer's n JAIL
so you can hand me a blunt and still
can't give me a L (LOSE)

check da murderous BARZ
if you win this then strings is
attached like WYCLEF GUTIARS

drop yo 8 lines cocky man

god damnit i didnt think you were gonna actually post...sigh..

Young against me? this kid is wwwaaaayyy out of his league..
no climax, it mustve been when it was over..that your verse finally hit its peak..
New to Rb, it shows with that shit that you call a verse..
nothing good to say about you kid, id be lieing if i said "Ive seen worse"..
shouldve posted first, then maybe you wouldve seen my verse and learned..
call me Brooklyn the way that im erradicating this herb...
hangin on every word, as you can see kid i didnt put my all into this...
cause every feeble punch that you threw was a total miss...

...and that...is word.

i was actually jokin when i made this thread...but you posted so..:|

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lol dezyir clownin this newbe
j/k
youngunner that was some ok shit
but ya need ta elevate
dezyir got this one
props

vote-dezyir

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Dez got this shit without a freakin doubt, better everything in my opinion, noob don't battle vets for your first battle.

Vote-Dez

POLL VOTE THIS:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=67377

I will poll vote this shit after you poll mine, to many people just take my vote and dont' vote on my battles.

I think yall both did str8 but dezyr came wit the punches she got at younggunner wit some personal disses....younggunner you spit str8 and it had a nice flow but, I think you could have done better...keep blessin peeps...

Sorry I didn't put this up......................................


My vote went to Dezyr......................................

i cant poll but my vote goes to Dezyir...he got this one..nice punches and nice use of em

can u hit dis battle Up so i can CLOSE DIS~~

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=68489

holla~Folk

easy win for desyr.....why explain...but fuck it beter punches better rhyme better flow..better everything.....
young u need a better format and connect harder...

hey can ya go check out my battle the link is at the buttom

^^ tru tru

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...ighlight=spirit
^^ hit this up please