aight yo....
13 lines max
usual vote rules
You drop first
Dont take forever

meks spit something for our battle its right underneath!!!!!!!!!!!!!
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

yo
you wanna have it wit cash, then grabit u'll turn ta ash/
brunin touch when i crash, bigger than a 10 keg bash/
an overloaded brain means the shipments late/
coted pain gleems on me as u git ya hip replaced/
shit re-traced, it's a glich he faced, i dug'a ditch now he dirt encased/
like a prosecutor werks the case, i'm out for a bloody verdict in this place/
text lines the best hacker in the world couldn't erase, an uncatchablle pace/
the un-crackablle source code even ya fortune teller couldn't forbode/
but here's ya crystal ball, as i stood in 6 spots at once ya punches missed'em all/
im'a mygician liftin mc's, wit telekenetic levitation battle technique/
no prescription refill please, i'm energetic wen disgracin Jet Li/
too fast fo da one, leave u legs wit two casts not one/
now who got run, cuz u aint movin, not even makin an attempt/
i'm choosin the life of brakin on the set/
fuckin suspenseful shit u breakin a swet, wheres that breather, u takin one yet/
Well i take it u should jet and just completely forget/
i could get nasty but u'll prally beat me, u a vet/

uhhh.....i said 13 lines max............................................... .................................................. .............................................

but dats ok since ima merk u...u didnt even cum at me dawg...it flowed but a complete idiot coulda tyed a lot of werds dat rymed....lol.....no hate tho dawg....im droppin soon...

This gonna be easy for P......
Can ya hit this up... dawg...
And i'll vote on this when you've dropped......

Pce

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=68478

It's like a ~bullet-wound-ta-da-heart~ cuz against me ~ya-goin-down-quick~//
Even if I ~spit-on-you~ with ~lyrical-virus~ you couldnt ~call-yaself-sick~//
My verse ~"strike"-like-"lightning"~...~"boom"-like"thunder"~//
Come ~"tornado-twistin"~ at ya and leave ya ~werds-in-a-blunder~//
Now it's like we ~playin-games~, cuz i'm ~"monopolyzing"-da-board~//
Funny...I could end ya ~rap-carreer~ wit a simple ~"yank-of-da-cord"~//
Meks da only kid on ~RB~ whos verse is ~laconic-and-illiterate~//
Couldnt get ~his-fire-goin~ if he ~quenched-his-thirst-wit-excellerant~//
U aint a ~scientist~ but goin ~ova-da-max~...Why u gotta be ~testin-me~//
~0-4~ battlin me? ~0-5~ is wut u ~destined-to-be~//
~Loookin-for-a-win~? Den y u ~facin-da-best-in-Young-P~//
I came into dis battle wit da ~intent-and-motive-to-kill~//
But dis time derres no ~"way"~ u'll win, even if derres a ~"will"~//


see i did it in 13 lines....

reference:
Playin games=monopoly...get it...
End ya rap carreer...yank cord shit=computer mc
Laconic=sparing of werds
Excellerant=makes fires start quicker
last line=where derres a "will" derres a "way"...not dis time

wow. Meks wasnt even a battle verse...at all


Well i take it u should jet and just completely forget/
i could get nasty but u'll prally beat me, u a vet/


^no.

Meks read some verse in the Lethal Lyricist League before you battle again dunny...you dont understand the concept.


Young. you only had maybe 1 or 2 punches the rest was filler..try to focus on attacking them and not rapping..get more personal with your punches...

vote= Young P cause he had a battle verse.

iight p got this, meks got a lil flow, and more vocab, but tha punches weren't there.
hit this up honestly.....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=68992

dezyir i agree with you homie was just rappin and not battlein this is called rapbattles not fuck the rappin lounge or some shit like that

cum on.....3-0 and uppin............................................. .................................................. .........................

Young P gets this better wordplay and hits.....and vocab, I liked the other guys flow better though.....

Vote Young P.....................

vote on my battle with AK if you get chance!!!!

yo.....upin....................................... .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .....