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i'll spit first

Aight Lets Go Shawty

You from "Detriot"? I'll let you run-up-n-down-my-"8mile", when it "hits" you on the "lips" like a "punch" I'm sure it'll make-you-smile//

"Battle myself" infront-of-a-"mirror" cause its like "Spittin' images", throw the "sharp" polariod down your "throat" call it an "incision"-from-the-"interior"//

Lisa's bout to get lyrically "impregnated" so lets say I'm "planting my seeds"-for-free, have her "flowin" but thats when the "water breaks", rephrase that Lisa "I got another-"bitch-in-me"//

"Input" elite textile flava via "keyboard", "flowin" thu ya head-like-u-in-de-"nile" You'll be studying my verse 24/7 I suggest you "Crtl+P-in-file"//(print)

Spittin "flashy"-rhymes so call my mouth a "digital camera" that never runs-outta-power, bending-spines u gettin lyrically "developed" so you'll get your loss lets say......"within-a-hour"//

Spittin sweeter bars that Hershey factory

wutsup wit u n all ur 'technology statements'//
the 'keyboard' 'the camera' r they ur frends' replacements?//

u should watch yo mouth about D-town, lets play the gingerbread man//
run nigga run as fast as you fuckin can//

take you to town n buy ur fuckin weapons//
my rhymes, my flow will leav u wit appointments to psychiatric sessions//

my shit will fuck wit ur mind so bad//
im lyk RUN D.M.C. that the world never had//

im done spittin my shit my times all up now//
good luck to u, 5harp5hooter but its MY turn to take the bow//



that was pretty sucky......lol but ya

I thought sharp took this
lisa got potential

But sharp had better laid out wordplay and dissing

Holla at this


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=69293


Hey sharp did you poll vote on my battle against rapaben

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lisa first barz was tha only ill thing she spittted...tha rest was
elemetary...work on makin ya punches betta.....be creative and use some wordplay...

Shooter was'nt that great either...but he had betta wordplay...brought more heat..punches were iight but ya flow was kinda off...anywayz..you stood out more....vote shooter

^ I agree

Plus one Lisa fell of the flow a lil bit win she said this.,...

take you to town n buy ur fuckin weapons//
my rhymes, my flow will leav u wit appointments to psychiatric sessions//

Shoulda or coulda said somethin like this.....

Take u to town and buy your fuckin weapons/
My flow will leave ya "Thinkin" like a pysciatric session//

U got think Punchline as well as rhyme when ya droppin lyrics baby.

Anyway Sharp got it wit a better overall verse

Vote=SS

A ya'll peep my battle against PhiXion aight. Peace

yo sharp got this

was good flow and stuff fromt the newb but sharp took his shit to a next level and killed her

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...ighlight=spirit
^^hit battle up please

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Pretty easy battle to judge...

Not really any serious wordplay or metas brought by the femcee.
She fed in her opener...
Just outclassed in every catagory.
Got's potential, though...
Keep layin it down, girl.

Holla back...
Vote here, please!

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