iight u spit do what u do

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no crew votes no hate votes no recyclin no bull shit go ahead fo sho

iight i'm checkin in but i can't drop till my battle wit trip-ill 7 is done..... it's 3-1 me......... but if i do this that will make three at 1 time... i aint tryin to get banned.......

why u take this battle then im tryna get this ova wit if im not onlie dont even try ta spit on tha reals

I'LL JUS DROPNOW THEN.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .

GIVE ME 20 .................................................. .................................................. .....................

i gave u 20 min and i have ta go so ill post my rap up tommarrow iight............................................. .................................................

~oUr Records are like~TWIX~2 for me non-for-u~%%
~When i'm done wit~this-lil-girl~they'll be sayin~the baddest who?~%%
~How u wanna be feared~when u claim ur from~DERBY~%%
~Ur rhymes are~corny and over-rated~like the kids toy~FERBY~%%
~cuz u kno i'm good when i battle ~niggaz like B-muse~%%
~u rhymes are like pamela andersons pussy~extremely-loose~%%
~cuz u a~chick-wit-a-dick~we call u the#1~DIKE~%%
~u couldn't get a man when u were a teenager~so u picked up a mike~%%
~by the end of this battle~ u wont even have a ~REPUTATION~%%
~knowin i'm the 1 who gave u ur first loss~gives me the ~greatest-sensation~%%

drop whenever.......................................... .................................................. .....................

iight

i talked to your moms the other day she said ur a bitch and sad always tryna be a fag jus like your faggot dad she said that verse u jus dropped was too fuckin bad that when its time for her to vote her vote is what I had//this nigga's talkin bout gays like he's Gay Lord Almighty he thinks hes tight but only things tight is his whity tightys ur rymes is like a piano....... low and off key ur name should be an animal.... whats that word for donkeys?//(jackass)this bitch flipped the script like that scary movie shit it wasnt yo mom in the back suckin on yo daddy dick that was YOU in the back doin all that shit// but dont trip.... we know u were molested as a child when u hear the word DADDY you flip and go wild trick u best settle down stop actin like a clown dont u ever bring up in yo flow about my town//mr.philly feelin a lil sicky so sick he gonna start claimin tha derby but we wont accept him cause his rymes are to slurry//oh i got a man he the one who jumped yo ass last night wit his crew i saw the whole thing last night it was YOU// i can tell by yo black eye last night wasnt preety a shame he beat yo ass last night in yo city// so before u talk your shit a lil bit u best know that i be that bitch twix i dont give a fuck who u be wit i dont give a fuck who u seen wit ill fuck up yo shit bitch


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$BiDdY-CeNtRaL$ -

- good intro. nice punch and good flow
- 3rd and 4th lines were not that great! compare a rapper to a toy... thats soft!
- i dont believe in using the word 'nigga' on the internet...
- good personals
- pretty good closer... attempted to punch hard

Twixisdabaddest1 -

- bad intro.. momma jokes are not funny or good battle raps
- your structure is horrible... cant tell if thats 10 lines or 10 paragraphs
- bad rhyme scheme... needs work there
- weak personal disses...
- bad closer

Vote: Biddy... its obvious!

Twix slow down on the profanity and line your spit up.
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i talked to your moms the other day she said ur a bitch and sad always tryna be a fag jus like your faggot dad she said that verse u jus dropped was too fuckin bad that when its time for her to vote her vote is what I had::: THE PHRASE SHE SAID was used way to many times takes away from the flow

VOTE : BIDDY

OOPS FOR GOT TO VOTE HEHE********************************************** ************************************************** ************************************************** ******

ok lemme break dat shit down....
Punches: Biddy
Flow: Biddy
Structure: Biddy
Creative: Biddy
Overall: twix, babe, ya need ta set ya shit up....ya structure SUCKS!! not a bad drop tho......biddys wuz just betta.....
My Vote-Biddy-Central

uupin for some votes..............2-0 me right now............................................... .................................................. ............