These r my rules

10-20 lines
No d/r hate votes
U spit first
U got an hour to spit
I'll spit quickly after u

peace

yo dis is my check in theres no feedin right??
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No feedin?

if that means bitin, NO

tell me what it means

And u have 1 hour to post.............................................. .................................................. .................

it means if i say somethin u can't come off off it
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Why thats what battlins all about isn't it lol?

Just post u got an hour no more questions......................................... ...........................................

Times tickin

ATTENTION ALL MODS

If Fedrick does not post in half hour can you please close this So I may start another battle, thanks peace............................................. .................................................. ..

yo
u might as well call the police now cuz im ready to start slaugtherin//1
if u used to tastin defeat then i know ya mouth is waterin//2

~lets get serious~
i'll leave this puppet like brand new fabric with no strings attached//3
this faggot gets used more than similes in raps//4
i will freeze ya gats, u can tell this pyscho is pure "ass" the way he gets "clapped"//5
this dude bows down to so many kings like me its like his knees collapse//6

~change up da style~
Like Sadam, U Really Never Did Have-A-Threat, FUCK IT! I'll Be The 'First' To 'Wage' Ur Loses - Here's My *ALPHA-BET!* //7
Treatin~Ya~Worst... Decieven~With~Curse, swift I'd Make U 'Eat Ya Own Words' But It's Probaly Not Even~Ur~Verse!! //8
I'm Shovin Rods Down Ur Lungz Like Ya Boyz Go 'Deep-In-Ya-Throat', & It's Like Ur 'Jerkin Ur Dick' Same Way U Have To Pay 'Pee-Pull'-To-Vote! //9

~switch it back~
An Ugly Playa Ya Flows Couldn't Heat If Ya Flowed In An Ozone Laya//10
Just A AIDS Conveya But Predicting Your Loses Aint Just A Soothsayer//11
Identies Re-vealed Pretty Ya Verse With Stars But Still Wont A-ppeal//12
LiC's Robbing Weed-Deals.. So Ya Admit Ya 'Drop Off Herb' That Ya-Steal//13

~closing~
Bust Out Sega Genesis And Turns On Mortal Comba,Selecting: Sub-Zero//14
Freeze Mode,I'll Solidify Your Tongue, Mouth, And Rip Out Your Lip-Ring//15
And Rip Out Your Spine,So Ya Front Side Can Finally See The End-ing//16

In this race im like a fat person, bette believe its you im over lappin/
Fuck this bitch Fedrick, your fuckin wack battle verses gave reason to invent the trash bin /!

Man Your verse wouldnt get love frum Cupid, all ur lines are stuck on stupid/
This bitch is guna burn, my words are fire and my saliva is the lighter fluid/

Lyrically, after this verse you'll disperse, consider this dumb fuck history/
You can't spit wit me, I'll heat this chicken on a stick, style rotisery/

I'll end ya blood line when i cut off ur head, leaven ya skull by ya legz/
Fuck ur punk ryhmes, they wouldnt be above mine if i was 6ft unda and half past dead/

I can flush Fedricks head down the toilet and he still wouldnt be the shit/!
I give him 4 bars before he's stuttering like Gareth Gates and that'll be his spit/

Im rupturing ur weak structure from steady to critical/
My punches are intentional while ur's aint even existant like the hood wit no criminals/

Its almost judgement time Fedrick, make sure ya lookin both ways/
YA STOCKS RUN OUT, so ill end this battle like Martha Stewarts Cooking Days!/.........................


Uppin....................votes.................... ..

Man this iste so retarded i thought I had well over 20 lines So i erased some

These are my concluding lines:

I thought you had some skills, but your just another newbie/.............
Words of wisdom, quit droppin shit and go find another cock to plug ya bootie/!
Real smooth! Ill put power tools in ur gloves Im ready to Drill Threw/ (Through)
This is a dun deal Dude! I beat U this time despit the fact Im new/
Even your stupid ass is dissipointed in U/..........

vote goes to SwiF']['

his verse was overall better, more punchlines and it cracked me up

but Fred, that "eat your own words" line was sick

props

Aight thanks but too bad ya cant vote dawg.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ........................

Swif gets my vote
better flo, multis, punches, wordplay
that martha stewart line was cold
SHEEET better everything, but just by a lil bit
it was still all and all a close battle
no beef, just elevate fred
Vote=swif

Thank dawg.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ......

Swift took dis easy betta flow and meta's and wordplay....no you to brand new though!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!new my ass.........


I VOTE SWIFTY YO..............