iite this one works lol , cant edit the othert one so.......25 max no dick/hate/crew/votes ill drop in a few

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...:::Startin Up:::...
Man you full of wack-ness...what your name say? 'Handsofgod' fuckin herb-ass-motherfucker you on rb not even a mod//
Little bitch wasted-peepz like you who think they the man, makes me vomit and i cant help it but i take fake-herbs like you out in auto-drive//
But i dont blame ur fake-ass thinkin your special cuz you have a crew on rb put you in with some powers you aint never gonna have in your-real-wasted-life//

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A seventeen year old bastard thinkin hes in the gates of heaven.lmfao face reality kid u little herby-prick u behind your real fast cpu postin some versesand when you off you suck some dick//
Mentall illness., get the fuck outha here..only seeing that show's how much your wack, the only time you come close to being ill , is when you stabbed with a deseased needle in your back//
You try to sound like a little gangster ..but you aint shit you just a prankster..you fukkin wanksta,sittin behind that expensive pc your daddy payed a nice big room full-off wannebe rappers things like//
Posters from your fav rapper and a bunch of golden rings, never worked a day in your life, you dont know what is like tryin to survive with your cousy little family and a bitch set-to-be-ur-wife//
You aint ill, you aint a rapper, you aint skilled, you aint have fans..you jus fake and u are wack, a little-cocky-suck-boy, seein a real nine shit in his pance//
Thinkin he's ILL wahaha let me quote this Anus-sucker ''UT is the best of this site if not THE BEST so sorry ur like a newbie against a kid with hundred wins..WE DECLINE THE OFFER''.//
Man yall a bunch of stupid-asses called us out.and than you fukkin duck, thinkin you the best and we dont stand a chance but for real you jus scared off the verbal-asault You bout to suffer//

....::::Killin This Little LifeLess Kid::::....
Techs test your body's elasticity....and I blast back more than army tests-techs ur restless and laughed at....but I'm pure evil...so imma show u no fukkin res-pect//
Make 'payments-to-battle' ! ur fake-ass can't 'afford-to-control' tryin to be as prince you alway stat an ugly-toad wild'll leave extacee 'geussin-his-path' like a 'fork-in-the-road'
Killin-this-kid...Handsoffgod couldn't come wit ' hot writes' if he was grillin-his-fake-bics' heres ur 'last-of-fame' like 'aaliyah's 'jet'! I'd take u 'under-mah-wing'! than 'crash-ya-plane'//
Food-for-thoughtget ur 'hopes eat your TOTALLY-WACKNESS, ur a bitch made fag-ass-wannebe tryin to inpersonate a 'G' and I think ur ass is tryin to 'show me (Fag)!!!//
Little bitches like you try to be G's on the net, end up with blood streams like water from the "big-gash" on your head, take advantage of him like a drunk bitch "smashed" on my bed//
Just fuckin-with-verses till this cunt-will-disperse and disable your spine......cuz my words are like bullets the way I spit and leave your ass hunched-on-the-curb-kid//
Never ever underestimate, "Thugz" "shake-foundations" like not-on-a-righter-scale-earthquakes, iron Tiger "devastate" your mind-state like fuckin S.F. tectonic plates//
When ur wack-ass read this shit....you'll learn never to stand up to the real G's cuz these punches-connect and close your fuckin eyes like narcolepsy-disease//
You couldn't flow...even if you existed of pure-beats, your ass was born-weak! and me? to form-heat, but your "under-a-tack", like "torned-seats"!//
I'll fuckin thunder-this-amature, once this kid saw my heat he started "biting-his-nails", like "hunger-at-bitchy-manicures"!//
No matter you win or lose, it's a role of the dice I'm killin fuckin quicker-with-lives....like 'fat-mathematicians' speakin bout ur Ill is just a figure-in-size//

....::::Wavin::::....
I' thru with you, it's over...get ur dick-votes up in this motherfucker...and claim ur-self a win...but you know truly in your heart...that ur fake and that ur wack//
You your crew all exists from herb's, wack's, fag's and flees...you know what im talkin bout im talkin bout the Never-Be-Sick-Wack-Emcees// (U.T)

Thats it dawg spit your thing..no hate jus battlin....

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It has a spellin error , versesand must be Verses and
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Like i said, your shits not hot at all omg, u dont have any meta's or good punches, man ur fuckin wack i cant wait to battle u.
LOL omg that was so wack I cant even belie u were talkin shit to me!

I'll check in on dis latrer

peace out

dont freepost you dumb-herb..........
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.................................................. .........you didnt even read faggot you replyed in 1 minute fake ass bitch....get outha this tread

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thats ova 5 minutes, enough time to read it, I aint illiterate and I know when Shits not hot and that wasnt

this isnt a free post Im givin u feedback. U need to elivate and stop talkin shit, Yea im new here but I aint no fuckin newbi
Now can u please peep that battle link, So we can battle?

^Was That Prewritten Or Recycled...........Took u 1min to write that shit.......il vote on thi l8r peaceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

what a prewriting fag... nobody can type all that in one minute... Looks like thug chump just copied and pasted.

hit this batle up niggas
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...0217#post670217
please

maybe hes just good at typing. Ha!.................................................. .................................................. .............................

or maybe hes just a herb!

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damn, plus i think the lines u spit were actually bars, so u did like 50lines, and damn, 1minute? u must be like 10000wpm ,lol
w/e
cool verse tho

Aghheemm....Cough...Cough.......

test resulst in....thugs do cry has has been valadated-for-sickness.....
cuz im clothing ur meat....like u were masterbatein-with-mittens.......
say u key styled this but ...truth is out..ur just fabracating-pre-writins..
im so far out ur leauge,so ill pull ur eyes out n carry them with me...just so ur staying-with-in-vision...
uve been forgivein..for being a retard...sit in curch with a comic so u could practice-dumb-prayers...
if u were foced u to take facials..in the ghetto..is the only ways ur truly a nasty-young-gangster...
Insane producer? could set a flame to your shows it still wouldnt be a blazing-set...
been here since june and now expect respect..having 930 posts doesnt make you-a-vet...
How do you expect to a win..when you post that kind-of-verse....
were on a different level..only time our names will be seen on the same page is my sig under those-murked...
how do u get respect with letters of the alphabet as ur crews-name...
let me spit in ur hands..so when u toss my liquid..it could be the first time u threw-flames...
u cant pull wait...u aint srong...ur weak..even if u were popi and ate-your-spinich....
its over...ill even write THE END in my verse..to truly state-that-ur-finished....

i thought it said 25 lines? i swear i got to like Chapter 3 line 14 in your book and said fuck it....you lack vocab and your flow fell off on numerous occasions...you were throwing punches but they were weak. hella weak. stretched bars combined with gayness=wack.

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THOG
Insane producer? could set a flame to your shows it still wouldnt be a blazing-set...
been here since june and now expect respect..having 930 posts doesnt make you-a-vet...

^this and your finisher were pretty dope..honestly you couldve just posted those 2 and won...your bars are still stretched though. shorten them bitches out. flow was there but fell off sometimes and you had decent vocab... you ripped this kid

7/10

vote= THOG