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Grandia | 0 | 0% | |
Eye~M~Ill | 5 | 100.00% | |
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07-30-03, 11:41 PM | #1 | |
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Grandia vs Eye~M~Ill (poetry battle must peep)
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rules unlimited but kept under 25 barz
topic a child being abuised anyone can vote as long as not in a crew or hate votin u said ud spit first go for it ill have mine down in 10 minutes |
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07-31-03, 12:14 AM | #2 | |
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scars emerge on young skin
as parents do it over and over again what does it be? the crack pipe or a bottle of gin to make u commit just a terriible dis-graceful sin to beat on one of GODs angels, he has send i agreed on most terms of discipline as if a child do wrong, its ok some times to put your foot in their ass but dont take it too far, until the effects look like your child smashed into a crash a belt is cool but why you gotta pick up a stick or fist or even a kitchen handy tool and bend the rules of child-discipline-abuse reports from school, pink slips back bruise and when they question it, you say thats ole news next time you raise your hands, look them in the eye amd think about, "is this the kinda image i wanna leave my child when i die" and your see, the truth will be in yor rely finish........... |
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07-31-03, 12:17 AM | #3 | |
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sitten in a corner i weep/
watch as my best friends get killed in da street// i look at my family and i know how lucky i am to be standin on these feet/ these emotions that i feel are confusing knowing wat ibeen through my sadness runs deep// runned away twice only to return to a beatin that would leave me scarred/ living throught wat i have noone would know the pain of a fist that hit so hard// abused by the people i trusted only to hear the i am so sorry over and over/ but they thought they was doing the right thing, after all would you back talk a drunk father// being as old as i was a had nothin to do, though i was destined to be forever in doom/ he would never have thought where i was for i was allways hidin under my blanket in my room// seeing the tears he knew they meant weekness, tryin to scramble wat ever bravery i had left/ he grabbed my throat and started to choke me to death// my mother was scared she diddnt know wat to do/ but wat she did i thank her for that to// she jumped on him to save my life she told me to run but i couldnt i had to help/ but i was to terrified by him so i hid underneith my blanket in stealth// dreaming of a place of peace and quite/ then i heard da door burst down by a riot// relizin that i was finally safe/ i came out from hidin i ran to the arms of whoever it was and they took me away to a brand new place// went through many problems as a kid a youning tryin to make sumthan outa my life/ as i go to the place where they laid her to rest for her to begin a new life// every year same day i go back and i say "thank you mom" for saving me/ and i remember that she is lookin down on me always but i always shed a tear// |
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07-31-03, 12:19 AM | #4 | |
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Eye got this with the way better meaning, I mean that shit was deep dog, I was really feelin it, nice ncie nice again.
vote-Eye Noobs need votes to, so can you?: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=69549 |
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07-31-03, 12:37 AM | #5 | |
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nice both of u eyes was a lil betta his was deeper it sounded like it came from the heart more but both of u good job MY VOTE- EYE M ILL 1
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07-31-03, 10:37 AM | #6 | |
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come on yall uppin this battle for sum poll votes~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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07-31-03, 10:56 AM | #7 | |
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Not bveing funny but this wernt that good for such a emotional subjet. The 1st spit was wack but the flow was betta than eye-m-ill's.
Im gonna vote eye-m-ill purely becuz his had more emotion in his and his perspective of being the actual kid pulled it off beta. Can you guys check my battle with meks.... |
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07-31-03, 10:59 AM | #8 | |
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we need poll votes people please good battle poetry and theres gonna be more hopefully if i can find more chalengers so
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08-01-03, 12:25 AM | #9 | |
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08-01-03, 12:27 AM | #10 | |
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my vote goes to eye-m-ill... purely deeper and better verse... keep up the good work dawg.. you earned this one
im not gonna poll vote till you fools vote on this tho.... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=68767 |
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08-01-03, 12:53 PM | #11 | |
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i am not able to poll yet the end is gonna tell me when i can hopefully soon he never gave me the power to poll so soon i will get the abilyty but can people please vote on this battle
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08-01-03, 01:16 PM | #12 | |
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i am not able to poll yet the end is gonna tell me when i can hopefully soon he never gave me the power to poll so soon i will get the abilyty but can people please vote on this battle
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08-01-03, 02:10 PM | #13 | |
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ill got this and please somebody go vote on the d-mecca and shadowenigma battle its under my topic not his please vote on it
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08-01-03, 05:26 PM | #14 | |
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uppin i am not able to poll yet the end is gonna tell me when i can hopefully soon he never gave me the power to poll so soon i will get the abilyty but can people please vote on this battle
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08-01-03, 05:52 PM | #15 | |
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uppin i am not able to poll yet the end is gonna tell me when i can hopefully soon he never gave me the power to poll so soon i will get the abilyty but can people please vote on this battle
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