Rules:
1.No crew votes
2.No hate votes
3.No d/r votes
4.10 bars
5.1 round
6.explain votes
7i'll spit first

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Let's go;
=Intro=
This fool is "well done" full of "seldome" origanility i can "tell none"//
I guess those rumors were true he had his finger in his recked'em(rectum)/1(eww)
=Heat it up=
This kid's a side effect from too much eminem like a ~Rash from candy~//
Your raps are the reason this site keeps a ~trashcan handy~/2
i'm pointing out-ya-flaws you confused?? stop-and-pause,you mine as well put your foot in your mouth cos i just socked-ya-jaws/3
Why you coming with the Herb shit?//
Battling me is like a "fast food resturant" cos u get served quick/4
this fool doesen't fear-men thats makes him a queer-then//
he's only called "untouchable" cos girls won't get near-him/5
Who's this guy am i suposed to fear-it hes got whack-lryics//
I'mma change my name to "magic shows" cos ur about to see his disaperence/6(ouch)
=Ending this stuff=
I asked for a ill newbie but i got a whack-ass textcee with nothing but whack in his spits//
I hate to bring up my personal life but i'm about to beat this fool like he was my bitch//7(ouch)
I haven't battled in awhile so me beating him would be a urban-myth//
I have to say thats false cos i just served-this-bitch/8(ouch)
i'm a fire assian there is nothing but hype with-this-blasting//
I would of responded soon but i can't type-while-i'm-laughing/9
=final bar=
I'mma split-his-neck,retire-this-wannabe-vet,serve him up like a ace in a tennis-set//
Pounding keys on your keyboard don't mean you can do text/10

uppin for you

a-yo, der waz a fire at an apartment buildin in my hood, and 3 of my closest friends live der so ive been there 4 hours, its now 2:30 in da mornin, ill spit as soon as i wake up promise, thankz dawg..................

*Respect*


-KiLLa

yo, I'll vote on this as soon as you spit, but in the meantime, could you drop an honest vote on my battle...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=70086

-Take ya coins, release bullets at ankle joints, ya verses like 'dull knives' they're ain't no point//
-I might deploy all bullets to swipe decoys, cause every line you gettin 'Pist-on'(pissed on) like Detroit//
-Leaving u with a empty spot like puzzels with missing pieces dragon could never be a Completed-Set//
-When i post my verse is the only time u recive Heated-text,even if this kid beat World War 2 vetrans he couldnt have say he Beated-Vets//
-Freezin this chump, fuck dragon, I'll leave you with lumps, bitches think I fill gas the way I'm squeezin the pump//
-I swear im cocky, throwin punches compared to Rocky, I'm like a door in the ghetto..‘dragon' scared to ‘knock me'//
-Like docters with babies i hold ur Life-In-My-Hands,like dragons i spit flames from the THROAT say i got flames Stuck-in-my-Glands//
-Like INSANE pros im crazy and kill u the way i take Knifes-to-my-FANS,ur not pleasin the voters like busy husbands that find there Wife-with-another-MAN//
-Pockets decayed, flesh burned, sockets displayed, you'll need a ‘Rolex' in ya mouth just to watch what you say//
-Hit from far, blades left ya body ripped apart, fam you couldn't ‘beat me' if we were to ‘switch our hearts'//
-Watch the votes realize what u spit is all Played-Verses,leavin dead bodys in flames call me insane the way i set A-BLAZE-HURSEs//
-Skining u for the game sold like Gator-Purses,watch how i play with this KID like cathloic preist in hospitals as Por-TRAED-Nurses//
-You hardly see me commin, I'm barred through streets, I'm like a soft dick in the game cause I'm hard to beat//
-Breath in sight, left at night, death by knife, now kats think you forgot ya glasses, the way you left the site//
-Ur wack people might like ur flow but all u do is rhyme any word With-Out-Meaning,no cry for help cuz ill rip ur voice box out so fuck Shout-ing-or-Screaming//
-Yous cry About-Feeding,i new u bit ur verse cuz ive allready hurd what i Was-Reading,but ur verse is wierd n missing somthing like drums With-Out-Beating//
-I Get-Applause as Metaphors Rip Ya Skull and Render Your Sprained-Nose-Fractured, Lord I Commit 'Straight-Sin-I-Penetrate-Skin' Until the Blood-in-your 'Veins-Flows-Backwards'//
-With ur weak punches saved up its inpossible that ur writtens-hurt,my punhces connect to the dome and leave ur vision-blurd,call me ur maid cuz ,dawg, you gonna getin-served//
-Gloughts and blocks, twisted thoughts and cops, chrome bustin shots, diabolical plots//
-But dawg, u keep runnin ya mouth lyk dat and u gonna end up lyk 2pac//





sry 4 da wait dawg,..........................................

lets start gettin some votes up in here...........
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29 views and no votes or posts, come on dawgz dis tyte shit dont sleep on it

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krimzen got this one and by the way fuck you nobodys pissin and detroit is untouchable bitch ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

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^^Oh damn,dog that's a hate vote.Read twords the end of his post.He voted for you cos i dissed detroit.I'd discard that vote but it's in the poll already.Uppin for real votes please