sorry that it took to long to set up but i was talkin to sum hot chicks on msn ok im spittin in unda 30 mins

this kids a weak 'emcee' cant beat a 'femcee' thinks of greatness and thinks of "me"/

this kid makes fun of me for liken a 'chick'then goes home and sucks his boyfreinds "dick"/

the closest thing he got to pussy was his mom in the 'bath'loved it so much but stuck to the gay "path"/

chumps like you shouldnt be able to marry on 'TV',marryin a pussy without one.....and he says im "weird"/

but suckin dick wont get you outta this battle fuck 'face'cause your weak rhymes to mine are just a "discrace"/

even if you had a metal dick you couldnt 'spit' and by the sound of ya voice you swallow ya mans "shit"/(cum)

man im killin you beggin to 'end'...this guys hand is his best 'friend', your tecnique is so old your way outta the rap "trend"/

only gun you ever held was for 'playstation' only job you had was a sign sayin "free blow job based on "temptation"/

weak ass fucker broke ya dick in a guys 'dick' and if that wasnt enuff i could kill you with a pin poke you "prick"/

when your fat ass dances the whole band 'skips' so poor you go in resturaunts and steal "tips"/

ALL THIS NIGGA DO IS TALK ABOUT DICKS AND PRICKS//
HE MAD CUZ HIS MA, AINT LETIN HIM SUCK IT//

THIS NIGGA OVER CALLIN ME A CHUMP//
AINT MY FAULT HIS MOMS RAISED A FUCKIN PUNK//

LET ALONE A FAGGET UGLY ASS U CANT FUCKIN HACK IT//
U GOT FIRED FROM JOB SO NOW YOCLOTHS ARE ALL FRODS//

I THINK U BETTER CALL ON THE GODS CUZ BEATIN ME I CHOULD CALL U A FROG//
WACK LYRICS EQUIL TO WACK LYRICES//

SO GO HOME AND PLAY YO GAME NEMIS//
U WACK U SUCK I WOULDN'T EVEN GIVE U A BUCK FOR YO DUCK//

THIS IS THA END SO LAZY BOY GO IN THA ROOM AND GRAB A PIN//
IM GLAD U GOT DUN IN AND I AINT KINGPIN SO I WIN//

ok that was tottaly feeding man....i said no feeding...fuck......ok we need votes.............uppin....................

aight uppin this shit right here...............uppin.................votes.... .......votes...................................... ....

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Ok well, not only was J RIZZ feeding, he did many other things.

1- none of his lines rhyme. what the hell is up with that?
2- no rhymes = no flow, this is a rap battle, not an argument.
3- you had a couple multis in one line but... it doesnt make sence at all.
4- just about half of that was feedin and it took you almost an hour to make it.

Ok so, my vote goes to wallbanger.

so yea same as above vut tengo shouldnt vote cuz hes in same crew but anyway wutever......

weak battle both dissappointing fo realz

aight

overall verse :WILL
Punches: WILL
Wordplay: WILL

the other dude wus weird wit his wordplay.....anyhow

vote: WILL

peep my battle vs PAX the vet

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...?threadid=70474

im sayin dats da way i flow yall say i was feeding hay i make a mistake dis is my first time but we win some we lose some^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

hit my battle up against gambit return da favor wit right vote holla at ya boi............................................... ........................................

j rizz got this anyway so my vote goes to that nigga holla at ya boi

vote-j rizz.............................................. .................................................

aight thanks for the votes.......2 more to go....uppin this shit right here.....uppin.................................... ..........