ok 10 lines max
no dr
no crew
no hata
no friend
votes
must spit today, if you cant then no battle.....

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aight cheeeeeeeeeeecccccccccccckin in here, goood luck and may the best man win..............................

i'll vote wen this is finished!

cam check ya pm's dawg, asap!

gud luk 2 both in this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!

WARM UP!

Keep it real and dont fuck up is my motto, wishin please santa please in his grotto, make me a lyrical god going solo but you got more chance of winning the lotto. 1

When you come up in here people scatter and it aint cuz there scared to get battered, its becuz you infectin all there brain matter, with a lyrical disease called much wacker. 2

Ok Ok thinking a little now....

I'll jam ya electrical brain inpulses, becuz you become impulsive and spit piles a shit which repulsive, cuz ya havent thought of results yet, so you spit quick and blurt out some bullshit. 3

All I can smell is the... methane, coming out of ya mouth and from your brain, your false starting premature in this rap game, tippin you off of the board shouting check mate. 4

Shattering you like... glass is the easiest of meaningless tasks, i'll leave ya bruised up with see through casts, so people can see the scars from my blasts and you hide behind this hip hop mask. 5

I'll leave you shook like natural disasters, earthquake you with my lyrical blasters, leave you cut and covered in plasters, your spits dried up and cracked like pastures. 6

You attract hoards after ya with zip saws ready to chop yours, for ya rings but you no lorrrrd of this, you cant take this dis, you leave cats bored with ya wack ass spits. 7

You styles skinny like streaks a piss you aint winning this, im so phat and you still cant hit my shit, you punk bitch, ya rhymes just aint ya gift and if I was stuck in pitch you still would miss. 8 (pitch, sticky black tar like substance.)

Its Over!!!

Even you if you ate dictionaries theres no use in you crammin, cuz your styles stick in ya throat like peanut butter without putting the jam in. 9

You couldnt elevate if I told you the meaning of word up, so you might aswell just cave in and get cold an stuck with my hard hittin rock spits ya dug and ya filling so much you got sunk. 10

Sorry it took so long but Im at work so I have to do that inbetween.....

I cant belive the people in here 1st Jack the stripper and now camj86, both wanna battle then the fuck off after ive spit..............pussy's......................... ..............

i doubt it's cuz they are afraid of your verse............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .

lol, trying to swaaaaay??????tha Rules clearly states that you have to drop by the end of the day Plus you left so I went to town for a quick second but don't worry, I'm here ready to drop

A qucik key off the top, just what I thought of his verse........

Kid ya raps faulty, with ya wack multies, ya game is unseen, must be below the surface
you stretch and "cheat in bars" like bartenders commit adultry, half ya punchlines have no purpose
"X" marks the spot so he is getting a "L 4 real!" That's common logic
I roll on you and pop like a firestone wheel, the only place ya raps take you is "OFF TOPIC"
I Would put "warm up" and "i'm thinking" in my verse, but its clear I already won
This one was mines before it started like you got diqualified for jumpin the gun
While I illustrate great lines, XL4real states fakes lines and wastes time
Since all he does is make noise and sway he should change his name to "wind chimes"
You aint even said a punchline, don't worry, you still got me laughing
Cuz ya scripts unintentionally funny, like communitty broadcasting

alright upping this battle for votes.............. may the besttttttt person winnnnnnnnnnnn.........

I thought cameron Had i tight flow and wordplay
His dissing was pretty good too

X4real seemd unfocused in this
X you usually come better than this i was dissapointed

vote cameron

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=70868

wanna hit that one up too

Peace

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=70811

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