here's the shit.............
didn't take long to do seen as it was a freestyle..........
don't forget sand, we agreed on a freestyle battle so your shit shuld've been up by now............hmmmmmmmmm

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/9/fiori.htm

yo, where you at bitch...............
this is a freestyle................
it shudl've took you 30 minutes max not 4 days............
hurry up and spit all that prewritten shit ya got............lol

Spit A.S.A.P

PEACE............................................F IORI

whatever. i'll make a verse now.
this is seriously not something
of much importance to me. . . .
give me about an hour . . . . blah

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i dont giv a fuck anymore, i just wanted feedback so if you spit people will leave feedback.................
but if ya see this peeps just say what ya think of my verse...................

PEACE............................................. ........................................FIORI

LMAO @ ya verse LMAO hahahahhahaha lol
your verse = No.
its the wackest shit i've eva heard hahaha ROFLTLAMO
hahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha

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Oh, The Irony

NwPirrelivance: peyo is the worst rapper ever
NwPirrelivance: lmao
Me: yes lol
NwPirrelivance: did you hear his audio?
Me: no..is as bad as fiori's
NwPirrelivance: worse
NwPirrelivance: i cant find it
NwPirrelivance: but its bad
Me: damn i wanted a laugh
NwPirrelivance: i could do a better audio with my text, the sound of me typing would be doper than his audio

thanx for dat, but i aint takin feedback from a wack bitch with 18 posts..........lol
only structured feedback from now on people plz.............

PEACE............................................. ..............................FIORI

allright jay,
can you be online at 5 on wednesday?
prank me if you can, we can battle
ive got to make this at least 100 characters longs so
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see you later jay

^ u called me wack lol.....

beat= ok
delivery= no (your voice irritating)
well....u basically said nothing.... there's nothing to srtucture......

- 0 u t

fiori are you there

gread calling fiori

you prick

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Your lyrics where not bad i could tell SOME not all were already prewritten or if not you already had thought about them previous to the battle. also you need to work on your voice. Im almost 100% positive that your voice doesnt sound like that in real life. Dont change up your voice to put on the record. It sounds wack when u do that. Also that beat was horrible for freestyle.. well it was just horrible period. keep working at it.

word up fiori sand musta choked.ur freestyle was good but the beat a bit dodgy,get in contact aint spoke 4 a while,holla bk or call me...MC Phoenix

delivery..you should be yellin this shit live you mad or somthin..
your accent..sounds like you said yo iss furi vis sond...lol when you say 'meeting' sounds like 'me-in'...the free was aiight tho if it really was.too many metaphors for a free i think not