10>30 lines no crew or hate votes

ok checkin in i will drop soon as you spit
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ok here we go...........

Yo rappad dude u probably think u can spit
but u can only swallow cos u suck so much dick
ur weak flows and rhymes are gonna make me sick
ur lifes gonna be over cos ure out of luck
im thinking about runnin u over with an 18 wheel truck
the only problem is the wheels are stuck, it dont matter u still
fucked
when i spit i dont make illusions
it just causes simple ass pricks like u to cause confusion
i spit the truth whether u have to bite ur tongue or tooth
loozers like u end up homeless scoring free soup
man im gonna put u six feet under
nobodys comin to ur funeral even when they hear the thunder
so mother fucker u better stick to ur day job
and u better start trying to pray to god
maybe then u can get some lyrical skill
and then u wont have to spend ur life fucked on pills
even if u change u still gonna look deranged
and ppl will still laugh at u cause ull rap like ur insane
all ur efforts in this batttle are gonna be in vein
so mother fucker just let me spit my flow
im gonna make sure my lyrical power will grow.

well, what can i say, nice verse ill be droppin in a few
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uppin dis

please vote on this and i'll hit this back

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...5168#post695168

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KAUTIOUS

PhSyCoLoGiCaL LyRiCiSt

ok check this out

Ragchez, ur rhymes are weaker then tryin' hard to rip through pages//
It's hard to get amazed by ur artificial phrases//
Leave ya disoriented like crackin' on asian folks//
One hit from this will leave ur fuckin eye blacker than cajun toast//
This is just the beginning of Ragchez's mystery//
You're done and finished, and im so far ahead of you its like im chasin' history//
And lickin' me is the closest ull get to tasting victory//
Just face it, I'm the greatest kid you seen//
blazin' scriptures be leavin' ya wasted looking for ways to get to me//
while I aim specifically at ya dome and cause ya brain to split in three//
Case dismissed, prepare to taste my fists//
keep doubtin' the god, I'll have to slam ya u atheist//

For this battle you were ready G//
Get rattled and savaged in this killing spree//
Just coz it makes no "cents"(sense) doesn't mean ur style is free(freestyle)//
Aroma of semen and swollen rectum the classic symptoms of a mademcee//
I've just succeeded in another case of open heart lyrical surgery//
Ur skills are fake like pergery//
Act like a killer but only strike with juvenile intent//
ur skills are burnin' out when ur at ur full extent//
You think that with ur gay lyrics u can ruin me? I take the blast of ur weapons straight on and I'm still standin' dentless//
And at the same time I'm also attackin' relentless//

anywayz nice battle and now lets get some votes
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yea that was good may the best man win............................................... ...................................

ok uppin for the first time
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i think rapped too this

no need for a big explination

wellll

when i spit i dont make illusions
it just causes simple ass pricks like u to cause confusion
i spit the truth whether u have to bite ur tongue or tooth
loozers like u end up homeless scoring free soup
man im gonna put u six feet under
nobodys comin to ur funeral even when they hear the thunder
so mother fucker u better stick to ur day job
and u better start trying to pray to god
your verse was a bit choppy and i wasn't feeling alot of the lines through

Ragchez, ur rhymes are weaker then tryin' hard to rip through pages//
It's hard to get amazed by ur artificial phrases//
Leave ya disoriented like crackin' on asian folks//
One hit from this will leave ur fuckin eye blacker than cajun toast//
This is just the beginning of Ragchez's mystery//
You're done and finished, and im so far ahead of you its like im chasin' history//
And lickin' me is the closest ull get to tasting victory//
Just face it, I'm the greatest kid you seen//
blazin' scriptures be leavin' ya wasted looking for ways to get to me//
while I aim specifically at ya dome and cause ya brain to split in three//
Case dismissed, prepare to taste my fists//
keep doubtin' the god, I'll have to slam ya u atheist//

For this battle you were ready G//
Get rattled and savaged in this killing spree//
Just coz it makes no "cents"(sense) doesn't mean ur style is free(freestyle)//
Aroma of semen and swollen rectum the classic symptoms of a mademcee//
I've just succeeded in another case of open heart lyrical surgery//
Ur skills are fake like pergery//
Act like a killer but only strike with juvenile intent//
ur skills are burnin' out when ur at ur full extent//
You think that with ur gay lyrics u can ruin me? I take the blast of ur weapons straight on and I'm still standin' dentless//
And at the same time I'm also attackin' relentless//
i was feeling most of this verse, was flowing and had goo punches, this is why he got my vote, ps: we should battle sum time

vote-rappad

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KAUTIOUS

PhSyCoLoGiCaL LyRiCiSt

Decent battle the both of you i was highly inpressed by ragchez as a newb/beginger you have some skill you should lengthen your lines a little longer and not jump around so much you here me, Rapped i like your verse a lot you came hard with some punches and your flow was better overall rapped has my vote but no hatin you guys were real close.....
Hit one of my battled up please
-Slim Lanky-

shit forgot to right my vote at the end my bad!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

vote- Rapped=

thanx for voting dawgs ive got 2 active battles at the moment but soon as one is done ill pm you kautious and we'll battle
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uppin for more votes....
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