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Zeesh 0 0%
Tha Remix 5 100.00%
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Old 08-09-03, 09:08 PM   #1
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Tha Remix Vs Zeesh

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Old 08-09-03, 10:31 PM   #2
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where u at dogg?............................................. ........................................
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Old 08-09-03, 10:34 PM   #3
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yo hit this up well you waitin......

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=71995
 
Old 08-10-03, 05:07 PM   #4
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sorry....i wasn't online...didn't see your reply either.....i'll spit now............................................... ......................................
 
Old 08-10-03, 05:34 PM   #5
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like a razor blades i scrape your legs straight from the waist and then my lazor rays make you say "DAMN, ZEESH GOT MAJOR WAYS, of taking the stage and making it his"/ i rule this biz, my fade aways make you hate and make you take your lame mistakes to the trash fast as i blaze with rage/ i can write a page, go on for days, i pave the way for emcees to play, i save the day from you gravely gayish swayed shit as dense as hey/ i make you pray, still i am your fav, i'm brave and stay on top of this game/ your a shame, lame, strange, de-arranged, pain-inflicted man (Main), un-tamed fame seeking, brain wreeking ensane little fan (fain)/ the thangs you say and games you play make you stay and try to say comebacks thatll maybe save your ass from my razor blades/ but make the way cuz not today, i'll rape you onstage through my mic and the mix/ i know your not liking this diss cuz it's making you pissed but shit's spit in this battle, so go back to your mix/ i'll never throw a fist but i will throw a classic hit that'll rip charts and hit hard through your shit/ this is my last line, i'm out of time, at the limit, my lines will win it, i don't need a finish, cuz you write dim shit, so dimwit come hit this without take 45 minutes to write your ten lines


yall know he can't come close
 
Old 08-10-03, 05:38 PM   #6
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don't take 5 hours to write yours........hurry up.......no rhyming dictionaries either.....spit hard but spit true...............UPPIN FOR VOTES
 
Old 08-10-03, 08:16 PM   #7
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where you at "Tha Remix"?................................................. .................................................. ............
 
Old 08-10-03, 08:54 PM   #8
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i wanna vote on this wheres your verse dawg.............................................. ..................
 
Old 08-10-03, 09:12 PM   #9
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Where's "tha remix" at??? spending 5 hours on a battle rap, i ain't havin that so hit me back, not wit shit that's wack.............................................. ..................................................
 
Old 08-10-03, 09:26 PM   #10
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where you at???????????????????????????????????????????????? ??????


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Old 08-10-03, 10:17 PM   #11
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where u at

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Old 08-10-03, 10:27 PM   #12
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oh shit dogg my fuckin' bad i forgot bout this.......i been gone all day i'll spit asap! sorry bout this dogg!............................
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Old 08-10-03, 10:42 PM   #13
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...:::HOT ASS OPENING:::...

Slappin' this faggot zeesh of disasta while his dickriders askin' dogg can i just vote honestly this time?//
I'm sure u seen me in all those sigs in front lines under "People who've merked me ta tha point that i cried"//
Hyperactive waves blazin' thru this like sun-rayz i know u curved so i'ma merk ya straight// (curved as in not straight as in gay)
I'ma spit venom into you like a snake then you'll die in fright how many hours will it take?//
My lyrical flows will infect you so bad you rushed to tha "ER" worse than influenza//
My razor "tongue" is so "fresh" as if i "swallowed" "winterfresh gum" it will make tha out-come her-en-DUS// (herendous)

...::::ILL EXPLOSION::::...

Lyrical passion' passin' thru your stomach of vile contractions i'm concluding your extraction//
Maximum rashes from poisonous gases flowing thru your intestines burnin' your ashes//
Lashin' and slashin' thru this sad-kid rapidly in fact this rap is gonna leave u sayin' what happened//
Graspin' for a grip and gaspin' from tha lyrical chemical re-action ya easy to tear like plastic wrappin'//
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Old 08-10-03, 10:47 PM   #14
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Damn
Tha Remix that shit was hard as hell
Zeesh ya shit was aight
but Tha Remix killed yo ass
sorry man

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Old 08-10-03, 10:50 PM   #15
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it took him like 5 years to come up wit that.....or should i say, 5 years to type his prewritten lyrics with fill-ins.......

his rhymes are off......can't stay on one subject but switch from line to line......and his lines don't make sense.....

vote for the worthy emcee
 
 


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