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****Crowd is chanting "Withersman"****
****Withersman walks on the stage****
Let me blaze this nigga
****Crowd chanting "GO!!"****

This dudes name is Audo but explain this//
he sucks in audio and hes text is fruity like Trix//
just like Deadpool, except my rhymes gave you cancer//
my rhymes left you lookin like the dn*L lepurchaun lookin like a prancer//
10 degrees of illness thats admitting you're whack//
I'm three hundred and sixty degrees of illness and can bomb you like Iraq//
this man's girl so fat her neck jiggles like jelly//
she mistakes him for a whopper and screams GET IN MY BELLY!!//
this is crazy you know he's had over 10 rehearsals//
cuz his skillz are as whack as the kids of the skippy squezze commercial//

HAHA this guy better add his name to his own bitch list cuz I just hurt his ass

****Crowd chanting "Withersman"****

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aight...I see how we doin this...

fictious battle rapper, ghostwrites, I'll "wither" your "exterior"/
Lyrically beat you so viciously, scar your chest, and "cave in" your "interior"/
you "wine" in battle, you "thought you hurt me", but that was some "sham-pain"(champagne)*/
my flows will leave you "hypnotiq", I "melt away your shield" with "acidic rain"/
I'll lethally "disembody" you, "seperate" your "soul from your body"/
It's kinda like "taking away" "Ja Rule from Irv Gotti"/
you must "like basketball", the way you always "palming balls"/
frantically speaking enthralled to call Withersmans downfall/
I spit "telepathic murder", so when you "read" this, you take your "last breath"/
I "type out horror flicks", cause I just "rewrote your death"/

*sham=cheap falseness

Uhhh.... ok..... lemme break dat down....
Punches:Hardly any by Audo...Withersman def. took dat
Flow:hmm...close.....tie
Personals:Withersman
Complexity:Audo
Creativity: Def. Withersman
Werdplay: Audo
Overall: Audo didnt really diss withersman dat much... not many punches...just complex werdplay....im gonna hafta go wit withersman, more punches, disses, and creativity....made me laugh too...hehe
My Vote-Withersman

No hate audo... props ta both....

nice battle but im goin with Audo on this one.he had a more complex verse.not all his punches were strong but his worplay and metas made up for it.Withersman's strong poin was his disses.not strong enough to give him the win


vote-Audo

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uppin

uppin for votes y'all!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Im Fully aware of the fact that im in audos crew....but dayymna....audo beat him in everything.....thats my honest opinion.....if he loses ill laugh my fucking ass off.....no hate withersman like i said thats honestly

yea nice shit
props to both

vote-audo

i think Audo took it barely it was a sick battle though...........tha basketball line was pretty stupid though audo but u edged it out wit flow and creativity and complexity
Vote-Audo

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The Creation

i think audo got this, his wordplay was better, he came harder in my eyes also, this battle was a close one, but audo's was better overall even though withersman wasnt that much worse, but he should improve

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=72375

peep^^^