ill spit 1st

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Look kid, I can smell your fear//
You think you hard sippin' on that beer//
But in reality, you like to take it in the rear//
C'mon nigga, I'm right here//
Mah rhymes are beatin' you like Craig beatin' Deebo//
You beatin' me is crazy like Jackass's Steve-O//
Man this is my show//
Nigga you ain't nothin' but a little hoe//
Go watch your fuckin' gay porn//
Cuz, motherfucker, you just got torn//

look at this kid, he's usin generic lines,
yo dick, Juss take your time, before i spit my sulferic rhymes,
ta melt ya brainz and shatter ya spine,
if you don't understand, you can't never touch minez....

his verse is shit, and his skillz is little,
cuz my verse got him surrounded, like Malcolm in tha middle,




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Silent Killer


Ripped him wit ease

Both of your verses are about the same. there not brill but u will get better seein as you have only just come on here.....................................

but if i had to pick the best out of the two it would have to be 8====D cos it just had a better flow. punches weren't great though...........................

good battle
good newb battle
u poth had sum aite flowx
keep spittin id give my vote to uhhh.....its a suprise.
one of u suk

look i kno tha verses suck.... this is just one of my bad day's.... i just didnt put much effort to it... but trust me im better then any of you think.... if you wanna find out i got a callout in bitch slapped

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=72476
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silent killa almost "beat" 8====D but he jus had "harder" punches lol and flow aight i quit us keep spittin both of u and youll get better props 2 both tho im out holla

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keep elevatin' READ READ READ all tha verses u can perhaps in elite front lines...........vote would go to dick man over there just because his were more harder punches
Vote-DickDude

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8====D
dick won but both were pretty weak if u ask me .
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indeed on what apprentice said,

both had no flow
dickguy came harder wit his verse
dickman was more structured and had better metties

silent u had the punches but they werent strong enuff

vote=dick

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UPPINNNN hurry up n vote......... cmon.............................................. .................................................. .............