-5-10 lines max
u drop first hit me up in aim....
pc
aitei ll be dropppin soon

i jus wanted to say that this should be a good battle.....

and vote on my battle cause ill be doin the same on this one

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=72443

aite i got u...............................'''''''''''''''''' '''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''' '''''''''''''''''''''''''
I GOT a VIRUS IN MY COMP ITS GAY AS FUK

checkin in ill drop in a lil bit aight

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Huh china.

YO/......

With nouns an punches… you ain’t better-than-ME//
our skills have a wider gap than Letterman’s teeth//
in my text and flow, ya challenge is regrettable//
get the message hoe, fuck a gat, a no show’s best-to-pull//
in general… cause I’m always dropping a masterpiece//
this bastard’s weak- who can match wit’s with me n my heat//
little rusty… but still sharp as a blade that cuts deep//
trust me on my worst day- ya word play don’t touch me

u gunna drop son this shud be a quick 5-10 lines battle i did it in 8 minutes 8 lines
cuz my comp be fukin up
an i still cant run da viris thing tell me how again..it says virius wuteva i click da link wher it syas go see wut da virius is an then there just a bunch of shit from there
uppin
me an da showstoppa where talkin on aim..for whoever thinks im on crack

aight check it

this battle is your "death wish" like a "reincarnated birthday"//
Im "killin you within" then watchin the "outside of your body decompose and decay"//

it seems like your "changin LOX members", this bitch is "switchin styles"// (styles p)
my rhymes "show hostility towards you", the words I add together is a "holocaust, witout no Jews, fuck gas", ima "inject the nile of west" into you//

my punches are "direct" like watchin "cable tv" on a big screen//
im "sendin rounds of bullets" through your "body and chest or in between your spleen"//

ima "send a bullet through your body", the "part where your brain is kept"// (head)
my context is set ready to eject, "modelin Osama" is the only time your "posin a threat"//

cuttin open palms, im crazed, your askin "who sein" (insane) like "Saddam"//
Strike with bombs, this kids flow is "out a date" like "dateless proms"//

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Huh china.

uppin fo votes (1)

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ill check it in the morn im goin to bed

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Huh china.

wasnt feelin dashowstopps
sumplayed punhces
holocast an sudam this aitn 2001 player
X came raw wit sum coo punches an quick merk
good battle
vote X
punches wordplay an rhymein was untouchable
plus it was origanol

aight i respect that thanks fo the advise and feedback uppin fo mo votes (2)

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Huh china.

I'm gonna go with Dashowstoppa on this one...good punches, wordplay, metas...he came harder than x-kalibur, and x-kalibur kinda had weak punches...

VOTE=DASHOWSTOPPA2

I THOGUHT X CAME HARD AN QUICK
nuthiin speacail from em both but X came FUnny as fuk lmao
With nouns an punches… you ain’t better-than-ME//
our skills have a wider gap than Letterman’s teeth//
in my text and flow, ya challenge is regrettable//
get the message hoe, fuck a gat, a no show’s best-to-pull//

little rusty… but still sharp as a blade that cuts deep//
trust me on my worst day- ya word play don’t touch me
^^^sum good ass wordplay mechanics
an sum coo lines
from em both
dashowstoppa nune the less came out clean props
but VOTE X KALIBUR

^^^ahahhaha

^^wtf damn rappin and amp yall hoes d/r x some much i think yall might have aids or some shit damn yall hoes vote on all his shit x dis aint coo man i can take a loss but damn this is jus hoed out tho

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Huh china.

imma go with excalibur for going to the beat, i dont like this style of really long lines that dont fit to a beat simply to add more rhymes in, EVERYONE should write their lyrics with a beat on and then we can start judging them fairly, but VOTE X simply coz his whent with a beat and the other didnt