~Live Life By Faith SiGhT~

Shots ringing in my ears
Fears rolling with my tears
I'm asked why I choose to live here
Why I choose to live in fear
It's the place for me
It's the place to be
Homies chillin in the hood
Kick back I wish you would
See what I see in my eyes
Maybe then you wouldn't be filled with so many whys
See the familia thats from 28th
We don't live by sight we live by faith
We know that we all gonna die
We all gonna cry and ask why
Thats the way our cards are dealt
Teary eyed and heart felt
We move on with life
Pack away the strife
We have our share of good times as well
We make the best outta livin in hell
Some get crazy snorting lines
Some make money busting rhymes
Kicking back on 17th and Lake
At the dance with our lives at stake
Smoking weed to ease our minds
Reminiscing about old times
We make the best out of what we got
We don't act like someone we're not
If you feel what I feel and see what I see
You'll understand why this life is for me

Live by faith not by sight

hittme up wit sum feedbak plz~1luv~

WOW!!!! I liked this joint right here, anyone form the hood would too i suppose. You not only gave us decent imagery (your hood was in my head) but you also let us have some of that emotion I felt in your other pieces. (I peeped those yesterday). If I had to say I didn't like anything it would be this line...........................

--Maybe then you wouldn't be filled with so many whys

.....only because it stuck out and to be honest you didn't really need it all it does is push the flow foward. But other that I loved everything else. Thank you for the experience. 1

this was a good piece... I felt it... you gave a good describtion of what it's like to live in the hood and what kinda shit a kid needs to get through every single day.
Nice piece of work, though you kept the vocab very basic. Maybe you can try and elevate on that
next to that, it was a nice drop

peace

Thanx 4 tha feedbak.I really appreciate it.The reason i talk bout where i live is cuz some1 said i should step up my game and do a topic that aint played out i think im tha 1st 1 to do this topic.Hopefully i stepped up my game.Thanx 4 the feedbak just hit me up and ill do tha same.~1~

clear your messages and ill reply...
and give you the sig as well cause your in...
your talented but clear your messages and
ill reply forreal cause its kinda annoying

peace

You've been caught, stop posting.