ok....lets battle

rules:
10-15 lines
no d/r, crew or hate votes
u spit first
check in

checkin in................................................ .................................................. ......................

ok dude.....awaiting ur spit...........................
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frowning, i'll leave this joker "diss-armed"..glue 'em together so you-can-"hold-your-grip"
cuz battling b is "checkers" - not a dice game - NIGGA YOU-CAN'T-THROW-AH-WIN!!!!
they got these homos lobbying the government 'cause b's abusive to these bitches!!!!!
i aint like this confused clown with a keyboard, I REALLY WILL LEAVE FOOLS-IN-STITCHES!!!!!
i'm relentless with ass kicks, leaving the-foot-in-you on exit so you can say you-knew-B!!!!
he always attack from number "two"? well, it's cuz he's actually more slow than-STUPID!!!!
ko? and yes yes you'll-pay-me, this homo was crazy to giving seven bars to-stay-him
probably didn't know that these babies hate-him, and like tuna tins they'll-date-him!!!!
like autistics with complications, word had-ta-fail-ya, b had-ta-blaze-ya
cuz lyrics were more plain, i had ta "drop wog" like England ditched y'all homos in Australia!!!!
my punch lines got "itchy fingers"...they'll pull before you draw on safety!!!
It's funny to me THIS RETARD WILL DID THINK ELEMENTARY HITS COULD FAZE-ME!!!!
News reads inform that these idiots can't spell their name-no-mo'!!!
But what can brain surgery-do?? I had ta slice-up-this fool, so he ass could prey-to-God!!!!

frowning, i'll leave this joker "diss-armed"..glue 'em together so you-can-"hold-your-grip"
cuz battling b is "checkers" - not a dice game - NIGGA YOU-CAN'T-THROW-AH-WIN!!!!
they got these homos lobbying the government 'cause b's abusive to these bitches!!!!!
i aint like this confused clown with a keyboard, I REALLY WILL LEAVE FOOLS-IN-STITCHES!!!!!
i'm relentless with ass kicks, leaving the-foot-in-you on exit so you can say you-knew-B!!!!
he always attack from number "two"? well, it's cuz he's actually more slow than-STUPID!!!!
ko? and yes you'll-pay-me, this homo was crazy to give seven bars to-stay-him
probably didn't know that these babies hate-him, and like tuna tins they'll-"date-him"!!!!
like autistics with complications, word had-ta-fail-ya, b had-ta-blaze-ya
cuz lyrics were more plain, i had ta "drop wog" like England ditched y'all homos in Australia!!!!
my punch lines got "itchy fingers"....they'll pull before you draw on safety!!!
It's funny to me THIS RETARD REALLY DID THINK ELEMENTARY HITS COULD FAZE-ME!!!!
News reads inform that these idiots can't spell their name-no-mo'!!!
But what can brain surgery-do?? I had ta slice-up-this fool, so he ass could prey-to-God!!!!

Pretty tight shit
Good Luck Wogzta
you gone have to bring some ill shit to beat that
Props to ya Brainsurgeon
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=73525

When your mind dements, it means my rhymes commenced, your rap style reduced to crap pile due to your own incompetence//
Your lucky your a brain surgeon, and that's your skill, you'd lose it tryin' to stop cerebral divergin' from my lines so ill//
You should practise fusion, cos you need to connect two skulls quick, but the theory of kinetic energy can't penetrate some~thing that thick//
You've lost your vocab, so buy a pince-proof vest, cos I'm a shore crab who'll eat your lyrics but mince the rest//
Could your synical mind get any slower? I'm a rhyme thrower, to leave you with one man boob and melt your ice cube with my lyrical flame thrower//
Shit's the only thing your spawnin', all you do is uninspire and rant, if skill was an organ, you'd require a transplant//
I'll choke you to suffocation with lyrical detergent, you need Dre's* medication to rise your skill above emergent//
And after you take the rhythmic soap, you'll be unable to burp it,
Cos I'm a wasp leavin' you unstable to survive a sting that's allergic//
And on a final note, you've achieved a basic doctor's degree,
But leave before I beat you down with my mechanics Ph.D//
I'm employin' thermodynamics to cut up fish in the sea, and deployin' you on a plate cos your tonight's su~shi//

*Doctor Dre, notice the connection between "doctor" and "medication" :P

ok good luck brainsurgeon, my the best dude win............................................... ..................................
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WHOA....I thought surgeon had this one. But Wogzta came back HARD! I can't vote yet, but Woggy gets this one.

Vote: Wogzta.

Better wordplay, punches and flow.

20 lines; please explain to me what part of your own rules you didn't understand??? i mean good luck and all, but you're taking privilege's you aint allowed

thanks man, i appreciate the support ................................................ ................................................ch eers :d

not all the lines are the same length ; some are shorter than others, so it equals up to about 14-16 lines to mine, not 20

well well --- i won't act a bitch --- upping' --- votes please ---........................................