10 lines max

Here i go.

ultimately i snipe mcees and ive scoped-out-the-wack cuz like retarded gospel rappers u juss hope-thats-a-rap...
ive broken-ur-back rehabbd ur spits and left u undope-in-ur-tracks ill say it simply UR WACK now can u cope-wit-that...
ill strangle u wit rope-in-verbal-combat and watch as u get gunned wit gats cuz like chokin on bras u juss choke-wit-da-straps...
it took u four threads of talk for u to post ur labeled wit a bitch-account along wit ur shit i should add to the piss-amount...
like poor refs at games u juss miss-the-count cuz like Gucci Store Sales you have a poor diss-count...
ill use ur own pen to slit-ur-throat beat u to a pulp usin ur woman juss to bitch-ur-quotes...
leave u stitched-wit-a-note that says "next time ill slice ur body parts and mix-em-in-a-moat!!!"(lol)...
Spittin remains one of the best-homo-boys uve been known to be a voyuer so u come dressed-to-enjoy...
a breast-from-a-boy cuz ur tongue squeezes more balls than frustrated business men and stress-toys...

Lets see what u can do..

i doubt you wrote that in two minutes but here goes::

Don’t claim to be a gangster I don’t say I’m a hoodlum I load mags of lyrics, aim at you and shoot-them////
You say you come hard but you didn’t even hurt-me attach a bayonet to my sniper and give you laser surgery////
I revel in your downfall you’ll never see my crown-fall I don’t have to spit tight to fight when I’m around-yeall////
I suppose-ya composure has gone when com-throws-ya “What’s it like to win?” Wait there I’ll come-show-ya////
I’m cold-sober, I told-ya I’ll goad-ya till its on if you attack like a soldier I’ll drop like a bomb////
The only way I look small is through the back of your spectacles indispensable and sensible got more joints then a tentacle///
Com is COMplex a COMedian I’m COMmercial I respect freestyle no need for rehearsal///
So show some COMpassion I’ll demagnetise ya COMpass I’ll COMpress ya mouth and leave ya jaw line frontless///
I’m the COMmander the COMmodore on this journey a COMmuter The Yak Pak COMmonwealth coming through your COMputer
Fuck typing and writing you need to see-me-spit I’m intricate so get rid of the illegitimate pre-writ-shit

I've seen that verse somewhere else on here by someone else.

U better not be biteing
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UPPIN
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I write mine out first then wait until someone wants to battle.
It's really fast and easier.--------------------------------------------
UPPIN

YO FUCK YOU LIEING PIECE OF SHIT< DONT BE TRYING TO SWAY THE VOTE YOU LITTLE PRICK< I JUST WROTE THAT

anyway HOW could it be by anyone else when i use my name in nearly EVERY line you stupid prick???????????????? awnser that dickhead

SORRY...man....no hate.....great verse by the way.oh and answer is not spelt awnser...........?-----------------
UPPIN

Are people going to vote or what. there's thousands of members.
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com came harder wit his punches which i think made him win...............................
vote=com
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com came harder.. both came nice but com was
Spittin harder punches...

Vote - Com

Return tha favors

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=73758

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=73026

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=73771

i agree with hypnotic on this one...

vote here
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...=8%3D%3D%3D%3DD

ok com had this from betta punches wasnt a great battle

plz can every one go n vote on this
rico vs kassius

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rico vs kassius

vote - com


both verses were weak .. com came with a punch or two that was better but other then that it was pretty weak..


vote my battle vs rico he posted the link.