u drop first

4 bars(8 line) cuz its a short battle
no hate/dr/or crew votes
no newb votes
must be explained vote
no quoted votes
no feeding
no biting

merk me

anyways good luck to us both friend

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oh shit my bad didnt realize ya posted up, gonna spit now...


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Battlin me u'll feel the wrath of a beast, u'z trash on a beat//
Thas why u resortin to text so u can cheat, but i'll have u beggin at ma feet//

Tha king rewind'um turn hypnotic backward, he's just script-chronic gettin smoked ba actors//
This herb can't add tha factors, ya brain stuffed wit wakness, practice, u still wouldn't attract chics//

Hypnotize ma eyes so i can see tha circles in run around ya sides and watch blood drip as ya body divides//
Wait till ya face and ma shotty collide next u livin wit demonic pride in hell u'll chris lotty wen he dies//

Time to die the rhyme in ma glock don't lie, watch as ya life's clock floats by//
Still i never boast my, talent, a silent assailent violence is vailiant, so much u wanna keep from round-it, that fuckin fat lady's song u betta sound it, cuz un-bearable is the sound of ya face wen i pound it/

im 'dispursin bullets' hittin u detach ya 'skull from ya face'//
you wastin bullet 2 blast through a 'transparent mc' and i cant be 'phased'//

im roughin u up, matta fact stuffin u up//
u dose bullets wit tar 'pullin it down' ur 'throat' ur rhymes do 'suck'//

ur lil 'losing streak' keeps goin like 'energizer bunnies' tha losses never 'end'//
i spit in 'rich dummy terms' for this faggot and he still cant 'comprehend'//

this bitch done 'gone crazy' think he merkin me thats 'ludacris'//
im 'cuttin' ya 'throat' cuz u pullin up 'short' like '1/2 days of school' bitch ya rhymes 'dismissed'//

hmmm...dont think i did my best....but oh well lets get the votes in

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Still i never boast my, talent, a silent assailent violence is vailiant, so much u wanna keep from round-it, that fuckin fat lady's song u betta sound it, cuz un-bearable is the sound of ya face wen i pound it/

WHAT THE FUCK WAS THAT not to mention ur other streched lines but please dude...u made my dad a laugh...that is one LONNGGGGGGGGGGGG LINE

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<center>Mike Albin</center><center>Oct 31,2003 Rest.In.Peace.Homie</center>

<center>Derek Raposa</center><center>Oct 31,2003 R.I.P.H</center><center>Your Both Missed Greatly..1 Luv</center>

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I'M GONNA HAVE TO GO WIT HYPNOTIC ON THIS 1 WIT BETTA WORDPLAY AND VOCVAB .. STRUCTURE WAS EVEN AND SO WAS EVERYTHING ELSE ... GOOD BATTLE THOUGH .. PROPS TO BOTH

VOTE:HYPNOTIC

tight battle, uppin for votes, nice drop hyp


"you hate a nigga Go and kill em while he takin a shit so when the cops come and get em he be makin them sick so they know how i feel i had a probable cause you know the shit that happens you dont follow divorce" l.o.x.

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"you hate a nigga Go and kill em while he takin a shit so when the cops come and get em he be makin them sick so they know how i feel i had a probable cause you know the shit that happens you dont follow divorce" l.o.x.

Couldn't agree more. Nice shit from both of you.

Placing my vote because I reached 100 posts






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Hypnotic won this wit tha punches alone.. kinda weak battle tho.. but if i could vote i'd go hypnotic.. hit one of these or both up in return

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=73758

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=73026

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