u know the rules check in and we'll start writing

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ok nigga, don mean to embarass you//
but i gotta tell u, dont think you thought this battle through//

im like the mallet at the strongman stand...im dropping hits//
you like a fat hobo in a bush...squatting to shit//

your style is infant...the way you spittin up//
take a number bitch, to get served...u next up//

my rhymes pop off like a gat...pop, pop, pop//
im just saying what all your bitches say...stop stop stop//

we all can tell u pussy...i left you bloody and pink//
stuffing tampons in your ass...bleeding all over the sink//

cant think of anything so im bullshiting now//
thinkin i can win, its easy, dont ask how//

if the shits to hard for you, you should take a laxative//
then maybe you have a flow, only the flows in the form of shit//


AWESOME VERSE

BEST VERSE IN THE HISTORY OF THE UNIVERSE.....lol...i love it...i have severe rappers block...so whatever.

UPPIN FOR VOTES............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ....

I see a crackhed and a -lyricall waste, -no attack or ambition, no -spirit to chase//1
No Rappa -just'a serious disgrace, -ya flow lacks transition and theres -fear in ya face//2
Youz like a bad credit card cuz ya balance of rhymes is maxed out//3
1 Vote, u hadda get-it-hard, no offense but u must be climaxed, no doubt//4( d/r's )
Ya punches, are like most sewers, straight full'a shit//5
My Hunch is, You ain't a persuer, u wanna quit rap alredy? say u hate this bullshit?//
Then git ya life in focus and film it, and getta grip on ya skill there killah Before I kill it//7
Step in da door witta weapon but i hadda conceal it, so i shut my mouth so u couldn't steal it.....//(envious?)8
I'm mis-directing your punches hot, from branding spots//9
so wen i'm directly in your face you can't come close to landing shots//10
Wish i could live a Mod's life, suffice a days werk by Banning Pot//(herbs)11
Finish you wit rods of lgiht, despite tha daze i merk u in u 'commanding a flock?'//12

uppin............................................. ..................................................

NO ? BOUT IT MEKS MERKED HIM, SHIT THA OTHER CAT HAD SHORT LINES LIKE A NEWBE DAMN NO WONDER U HAVE MORE LOSSES THAN WINS

VOTE=MEKS

Meks took it wit better flow, punchlines and wordplay
Killah your drop was nice too though
good battle
Vote-Meks

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Respect is all I'm after.
Prime effort is all you can expect.
Perfection will be promised in time.

The Creation

seriously...dude...that was the wackest verse ever dropped...EVER...im proud of myself.....................................uppin

exactly, words straight from his mouth

i think everyone else already explained the shit........meks murked this kid......vote=meks....p c z

fuckin uppn this thred fo sum mufuckin votes dont sleep, i dont care if it's 2 a.m.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,ppl are not ALlowed to sleep
peace

no hate but i totaly agree.. good battle ya'll