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no crew, hate, D/r votes
no biting, feeding, recycling

u drop first

checkin in......ill spit in a bit.....
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iight hurry up

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aight.......keeeeeyyyyyinnnn

yo ima expose dis fake MC IMPOSTER if i aint come hard u gonna COME-SOFTER he so dumb he thought Jam Masta J WAS-A-DOCTER!!//(docter J..)

His name is Doctor J but he neva PASS-THA-ROCK when im done u gonna CATCH-A-LOSS dey call me tha “master” tha way I got dis BATTLE-ON-LOCK!!// (master lock is a kind of locks…)

Mah flows ARE-VITAL u got worse “key styles” retards at deaf PIANO RECITALS i jus froze ya spit im tha IceMan jus call me YOUR RIVAL//(tha iceman aka George Gervin was Docta J’s Rival..)

Docter ya flames gone ill PASS U MY LIGHTER hittin boyz from tha back is tha only way UD BE A FIGHTER dis kid thinks he iLL…jus cuz he CATCHES-A-BITER!!//(sez he catches biters...)

Prepare to b SLIT-IN-TWO i thought u wud bring death tha way u KISS-A-JEW u spit like itz TWIGS-U-THREW when i finish dis clown hes gonna b SIX-N-TWO!!//(judas kissed jesus and he was a jew...and hes gay so he kisses jews..hah and hes 6-1 right now..)

aight......datz my shit....uppin fo urs...

"Punches After Punches"

U A "Artificial-Intellectual-Child"...Born An "Illiterate-Retard-At-Birth",
I'm "Lyrically-Immortal"...Killin "False-Mc's" Who Dwell On The Great Earth//2

Prodigy, Ur Gonna "Die-Quick"...Ur Very "Imminent-To-Ur-Death",
I'll "Slice-Ur-Throat" And Leave U To "Choke-On-Ur-Breath"//4

U Couldn't "Have-Hot-Rhymes" Even If I "Sent-Ur-Verse-To-Hell",
U Couldn't "See-Bars" Even If U Was "Convicted-Of-Biting" And "Took-To-Jail"//6

Just Like "Chris-Tucker" This Fag Won't Live To See "Next-Friday",
He Just A "Dick-Sucker"...Who's Verse "Get's-Passed" Like "John-Elway"//8

Ur "Throwing-Punches" Like A "Child-In-The-Womb"...Your Arms Ain't "Fully-Developed-Yet",
My Punches Are Perfected...There Hittin U Direct Like Sharp Bullets From A Teck//10

uppin 4 vote

-explaination-
A Prodigy Is An Intellectual Child Thats Why I Called Him An Artifial Frodigy Or A Fake One

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uppin 4 votes

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aitte....nice spit.....

uppin fo vote.....

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This was an ok battle

both yall had iight spits

heres my break down

flow=tie<--kinda
punches=dr.j
vocab=dr-j
structure=j dudes verse is just spread all ova
overall-j

this battle was close but doc got Prodigy In every catagory
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check out my open battles

ill vote here if yall vote here

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...7130#post717130

Thanx 4 da vote

Yo krunk Im might be starting a crew or collabin wit sumone as leaders i'll PM u

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uppin 4 more votes

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1-0

Ummmmm

flow=AZ
punches=kinda of tieed, but more on Doccs side
vocab=Dock
complexity=Dock
Creativity=Dock
metas=dock
similies=dock

Docks verse killed the other kids, But dock u got horrible flow their all run on sentenced, anyway can u return the favour dog, peace

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=73175

I know dats what im workin on now

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thanks 4 the vote and helpin me out

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hm......aiight..........




uppin fo votes......





1-0 Docta............uppin........

aiiittttteeeee 2-0 now...

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uppin dis.................