10-15 lines
5-0 3-0
no hate
no dick
no crew
verses due by the end of the night

checkin in

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ayo lets do this

OPENER

disect limbs...snatch his TIMBS...i'm giving this kid the BOOT
quick like the Giants with SimmS~/~


LETS GO

this kids ARMS are missin i can't feel His PUNCHES...
fag scared of PUSSY so bad he won't even EAT OUT at LUNCHINS~/~
Run bitch...your not on my level to compete lyrically....
smack this fag with a KOdak so his image is inhanced better digitally(fingers is digits)~/~
bitchboy...yardboy....i'll mow down ya mom....
have you startin ya own thing IGOTMYASSRIPPED.COM~/~
don't you want some whore....Strike ya vocal chords....
til the floor quakes and ya rhymes flop like on every SITE before~/~
resite some more...vest kicked in...chest singed and
split ya heartless....should have me on IGNORE~/~
this bitch slurrs words worse then verbs drunk....
have you hidin foolish like when ray ray hid in the trunk~/~


onez

Graffiti ya whole body in surprise-and-tag-ya-spleen/ shoot you every week coz you’re subscribed-to-my-magazine
I’ll scald-ya-cold-front I’m as bald-as-a-monk and as assertive-as-abbots/ long lasting pain like you’re allergic-to-tablets
New to the underground so I’ve revamped-the-basement/ watch me pull out your tongue to retract-your-statement
The longer your write the more your flow-worsens/ the verbs for a herb is “LETS GO” before-verses
You’re already senseless so you can’t feel-my-punches/ blind, deaf and defenceless so you can’t you hear-the-crunches
So you better be sharp coz I’m gonna put it bluntly/ have to cut off my head and my legs just to stump-me
I put most in the shade but it says-I’m-a-newbie/ you’re just the calm before the storm like the trailers-on-a-movie
You’re just a blade of grass and I’m the lawnmower/ I’ll cut you down to ground and next week I’ll start over

com got this by his wordplay, i didnt see alot from syn tho

but good battle

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.TCS.

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Yo, i cant vote but im'a say..... That COM nigga has some tight lines and if i could vote *Caugh COM Caugh*
lol
Halla
One

syntext - the igotmyassripped.com line was pure butta, i liked
that a lot, but everything else seemed like it was just filler,
not too much thought put into it. close was not bad though

com - subscribed to your magazine line hit right back, also liked
your wordplay, strong close

vote goes to COM

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structure-syntext
wordplay-syntext
flow-com
punches-com
dope battle but if i could poll vote it would be com...i just thought he had the slight edge

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=74453

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cough trying to sway the vote cough