mother fuck. forgot to post the poll damnit anyways rules.

no d/r votes
no hate votes
no crew votes
no feeding
no biting
15-20 lines
drop by midnight today

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aigh't I'm droppin this heat right now, I'm sick of clownin around with a punk ass that don't know how to bounce, luaghin at this, cuz ur name starts with that shit, but I havent seen a bust from u yet, that I could get a vibe from the shit u spit makin u an instant bitch, easy for targetin cuz u cant come up with a straight diss, cuz u spit in all directions makin it shit, so just give in, cuz I'll just end up killin u with this, merkin u cuz u cant handle this, u still listenin kid? and don't think bout usin none of this, no biting or feeding of my riff, hey doggydog, go fetch a stick, and go suck some more dick while u at it, but don't get mad at me, cuz I'm the only one thats hot on this scene, ur the one that wanted to battle me, I dint ask for u to pm me, and try to diss me, cuz u all pissy, that I dissed ur lame beefs, in the cyphering screen, u gotta be fuckin kiddin me if u think that u can beat me, just leave me, and this battle cuz I don't think u quite see, the lesson u shoulda learned early, but u actin up all girly, and surely u dont know, the concept of carryin a tune, listen fool, dont make me hafta hurt u, and I wanna see if u can bust 20 lines to, but ur runin around like a tool, holdin onto a spoon, askin all the dudes, if they need help for u to eat out their shit tube, so fuck u, fool.

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Ya best check ya-self, Gene-Pool, cuz the Dawg's quick ~2~dispose-a-fool/
What? I thought ya knew, I'm quick to expose~N~annihilate ya Newb-Ass-Crew/
Fucken with heat ya get burned, incinerated with no concern, I'm wasting my time, cuz ya still need to Learn/
On this ground I stand Firm, from my punches ya Squirm, while my lyrics Swallow ya-like-A-Worm/
Ya got Flow but ya Structure's a No-Show, Spine-less like semenal fluid garggled by ya-Hoe/
Elevate before ya step to this Pro, cuz I'm waxing ya Ass, like Mr. Clean or that old school Mop~N~Glow/
Ya wouldn't know heat if it was singe'n ya feet, with the alphabet in ya sock's ya couldn't hand me D-Feet/
I'm sorry but ya shit's just too weak, like a calcium deficient computer Geek/
My flows are energetic, my attractions magnetic, while ya simple ryhmes are pathetic/
It must be Genetic, ya-Pool is feeble and diabetic with an audience apathetic/
Stepping to me, ya soon to regret it, my wisdom's prophetic and my Rage is Frenetic/
Ya fucken verse was non sence, in every essence, ya Adolescence needs massive Convalescence/
This dog's chewing on MIC's, while ya just Barking up Hype, asking MOMMY to give ya-a-wipe/
Ya sorry net-soldier, I'll grind ya ass like some Folger's, serve ya heated like Doja/
Smoke ya ashes, I told'ya never mess with this rover, the PM was just to Scold'ya/
So please don't bite my style, cuz ya world's in deenial, consider this ya trail, before I leak ya stomach bile/
High powered weapons tearing thru ya flesh, like that Cat David Karesh/
Set ya compound on fire, forever confined to a suit made of Mesh/

Gene "POOL" I just bitch slapped ya so hard I got ya doing "LOOP's", taking it in ya-Poopy-Chute/

One line left to go, so this surely spells ya Woe's, MR. Bounce ran this Show, and ya just ate some CROW'

Good luck on the polls....

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^ Well that was my verse, a quick key style, hope it is was good enough to get some vet's to vote.... Good Luck Gene Pool, and I appluaed your lack of hesitation at setting up this battle thread... I respect ya for that, too many other cat's just talk the talk!!!!

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OK IM GONNA BREAH IT DOWN

punches=bounce
creativity=bounce
flow=bounce
personals=bounce
wordplay=bounce
metas=bounce
multies=bounce
made me laugh=bounce
final vote=bouncedoggydog

Wow.......Bounce Dizzle ya did pretty damn good for your first battle dawg.......Vocab was dope and punches were on point....Gene pool u need to elevate man, and re-evaluate your verse structure........It needs help

Vote = Bounce


Yo Check my battle out against X ecution........

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=74641

vote bounce
betta every thing
vote at my battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...1611#post721611

wow bounce, that was ill.
Gene-you had a decent verse too, but don't put it in paragraph form like that.
Bounce had better flow punches and wordplay
Vote=bounce

Thanks for the votes everyone and your comments are very appreciated, we all need to elevate so I take your advice serious... I was just going with the flow at the time, I should have done a couple of things different, I admit that...


Uppin....

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