due in a half hour...
10 lines max
no biting,recycling
no dr,hate votes

check...

Big Mistake
You're gettin shot down in a "riva" like Germans in Ameican flight simulates/
Even tho you've mastered your "joy stick" like mormans and get "highs" on kids-as-if-they-were-stimulants...

Amphetamines-methaphetamine, coke-crack and tobacco are what stims are all about/
But you completely fucked up ya' life and chose the R. Kelly route!

*Cracks Knuckles*

I'ma hafta find a "pad" fo' ya' "pussy"-like "flows"/
You so fake~the last time u sniffed "coke" da "ice-cubes" got stuck in your nose!

Even if ya "rocked" with the "Stones" you still wouldn't fit in/
Cuz you're just another kid wit a towel on ya head claimin' you've "been-laden"(laden=physically or mentally challenged lol)

Ends The Fight With One Last Punch

Your rhymes are like razor-blades, disposed after a close-shave/
But you couldn't "cut" me if you coached triple A... (basketball)

Uppin fo votes once we both spit...peace

nice verse ill vote wen he drops
in the mean time hit my battle up wit gc hand
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sry for the freepost

the flame torches,wicked with it,i'll leave ya bleedin,son its settled,
I saw ya verse and punched the guy who said Reading's Fundamental
son its over,you aint nice with it,& u wont sneak the victory
& i'd hate to be your peeping tom,cuz all i'd see is misery
I'm not tryin,ur wak and im still winning,so kill your Raquet...
Baseball bat...Hockey Stick...and any other Gadget
Silly Rabbit,Fucking Clown,F you and ya mother too,
Fuckin Virgin
Only Time You Get ya Head touched is during duck duck goose
You Suck,thats Truth,bitch,i'll say it til it gets Repetetive,
and id say Ripping u was Fun,but ya not worth Mentioning

not bad for a newb riva, but fundamentals took this one
heres the breakdown
wordplay=fund
vocab=fund
creativity=neither
metas=fund
punches=fund but it waas close in my opinion
flow=riva, fundamentals lines were too strecthed to keep a consistent flow

overall vote=fundamentals

no hate, no beef just honest vote

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=74731

lol@ this clown...im not a newb...i see fags in this forum still running around voting for each other...i swear this forum needs a fukking mod to clean this bullshit up...

UP...somebody with some SENSE vote...

FUNDEMENTALS GOT DIS SHIT
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this shit is ridiculous...^ thats a legit vote? fuck at of here...nebie ass fucking dick ryding faggots...absolute gayness...this ofrum is horrible.....................

fuck u ur the newbie dumbass nigga
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im not a newbie fool... ive been on this board longer than u i just have a new name,wak ass no talent bumb....

Word...explain your votes please...Riva quit bein such a pussy cuz I beat you hands down..

lol ur fucking wak with ur newbiesh word play and horrible played punches...if i posted this shit on a legit forum of a legit site ud get fukking ko'ed....

Go report it in investigated reports then if u think i am winning by dick riding bitch.....the fact is i merked you hands down and noone thinks otherwise....so go back to your wack, herbish site and go collect some wins if it makes you feel special.<<period

look riva cut that dick riding shit out man i dropped an honest vote and explained each category, fundamentalz was just better get over it, i didn't no you were not a newb, i dont have time to keep up with the history of every muthafucka that comes in here
all in all i liked the entire battle and liked some of your punches
but some of your lines rhyme scheme fell off in some places and funda was more consistent, so get off that d/r shit man and come harder next time
holla