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Both verses due 25 min after check in
good luck dawg, and no beef

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cccchhhheeecccckkkiiiiinnnnnnnn......... good luck to u....p e a c e..............................

You can trust I'm hatin', ya couldn't "hold" a chance in hell if ya "clutched" on Satan//
Can hold ya own??Herb you just mistaken, cuz like movement being stolen, action must be taken//
Yo Gchand, I'm shootin' ya down kid, like gunnin' the south//
And it's like "ya put ur lips on a treadmill" the way this kid's runnin' his mouth!!//
Battlin' me, you got "poor" judgement like I "dropped the wage", ya need to stop the rage//
Cuz you could throw stones at a platform and still not "Rock tha Stage"//
My lyrics draw glares, cuz like"Duke Basketball" fans always gotta "stop an see"//(stop NC)
Gchand coming prewritten cuz he could let a musical not fall and still not "drop a key"//(keystyle)
I'm treating ya worse, deceivin' with curse//
Gchand I'd make you eat ur own words, but it's probably not even ur verse!!!//
Pick up a Mic, this kid's out of luck when I blaze, lighting "Jackson on fire" is the only way he'd have a mic (mike) blazin'//
This kid's "lost" in this battle as if he's Stuck "in a maze", cuz rearrangin' my lyrics is the only way he'd be "a-maze-in'"//

(Last line: rearrange in a maze to get a-maze-in(amazing) just clarifying that up)

GC U Dumb Fuck.....I told u to set our battle up........Go set that shit up....And et whats comin to ya............................................

quit freepostin and no u didnt say go set it up..................................... ill set it up ina bit....

peep my two battles with stars and thug.......first page and i will vote honesly on this......................................

You don't wanna battle this emcee from the Verbal Rapists//1
My rhymes will mutilate yours, and you will cease to exist//2
I'ma use blades that'll graze ya brains lyke a laser that rips at high octane//3
Your lyrics are whacker than a dumb nigga who be high on "cocaine"//4
I'm sick of you rookies, and I'm fuckin' tired of you losers//5
You can't harm me online so why even bother connecting computers//6
Your rhymes I'll melt with the hotness I spit wit great finesse//7
You got no style, no flow, and your record says you'll neva b a success//8
You raps are so garbage it seem lyke you got little kids writing ya shit//9
Ya lyrics are played lyke R. Kelley punches, but you still ridin' his dick//10
Your ass couldn't DE-FEET me if you took a blade to mah shins//11
Dawg, how you gonna explain a loss to a guy wit just five wins//12

^^nice drop now let's get votes
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uppin...
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aight i thimk rappad harder he had better punches flow and it was more interesting.... Gchand u were aight but it was a lil too basic u need put a lil more into ur verse......aight props to both

can ya check this battle http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=74841

hit dis shit up wit an honest vote aight?

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=75079

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