10 lines(lines, not bars, lol)
i go first
no feedin'
usual voting rules

checking in, i will be droppin shortly, peace and good luck
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um 10 lines......??????? lets make it 15 airght,,,,,,,,,,,,,,........peace ill spit when i get back, and just cuz im online dont mean Im here.................spit

yo guys hit this battle up with an honest vote and i'll vote here hoestly...............

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=74922

I Flow for Fame when you know your Lame and definately not a crowd pleasa(pleaser)//
Your structure would only be famous if you meant for it to look like the leaning tower of Pisa//
Your probably ugly as fuck and for pussy you just have to beg//
A dog even has to close his eyes when its humping your leg//
Ya lines are ghost ya couldnt hold a flow if ya fist were tampons//
Got problems shining on bars like cashiers and broken scan-trons//
Ya name should be MC pedestal cause you another bitch I stand-on
My Flow envelopes, lyrics address, and punches put the stamp-on//
I'll throw each one of ur limbs in a great lake then we'll see how you'll flow//
This guy should be on Baltic Avenue cuz he's next to go//

I Flow for Fame when you know your Lame and definately not a crowd pleasa(pleaser)//
Your structure would only be famous if you meant for it to look like the leaning tower of Pisa//
Your probably ugly as fuck and for pussy you just have to beg//
A dog even has to close his eyes when its humping your leg//
Ya lines are ghost ya couldnt hold a flow if ya fist were tampons//
Got problems shining on bars like cashiers and broken scan-trons//
Ya name should be MC pedestal cause you another bitch I stand-on
My Flow envelopes, lyrics address, and punches put the stamp-on//
I'll throw each one of ur limbs in a great lake then we'll see how you'll flow//
This guy should be on Baltic Avenue cuz he's next to go//
I pollute "wisconsin" with my phosphate visions lost hate given with my rock slate spittin hardcore faggot I'll leave your prostate mission//
Distance your tongue from my name or get bludgeoned with shame bustin on MOB and I'll bust shit with rage//
I'm effectively mad fuckin coward your reflections at hand to be dissected as planned now you want the rest of me?...Naaa

^^this is my whole verse, i posted my original one before i saw you put 15 lines, so i added a couple more lines, so this is my verse good luck

Opener:

If this bitch wins It'll be an "Accident" like "Nuclear Melt Down
Mis-Functions".........Rappads on a "Kamakazi Mission" wit No Victims He's nuthin But "Self-Destruction"/

Ur Done:

Get the fuck out this website man "Fly Away" and "Dispatch".....Rappads trash and wouldnt "Ignite" if he was Gasoline nursin a fuckin "Match"/

I've takin down Bigger bitches than You, Ill Delinquents? Fuck that Wack Crew........Punk you gun leave this battle wit ya "Balls Shrunk" like Chasin Galons a "Mountain Dew"/
(ppl think Mountain dew shrinjks nuts, and ur crew IS WACK)

Dont fuck wit these lines and Ryhmes cuz they nuttin but Lyrically Devine.....Im like "Goosebump" Books I always send Chills up Lil bitches like yous Spines/

Finisher:

U gota betta chance of Winnin than Mugsy Bogues Does tryin to Slam Dunk.....Ya Rep is sorta like "Much Music" illistratin No "Hip Hop" but "Straight Punk"/!
(Much has so much Punk on it)

Man nobody vote yet im addin shit like u did hoooold up

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Not bad Rappad ya had sum good punches

Opener:

If this bitch wins It'll be an "Accident" like "Nuclear Melt Down
Mis-Functions".........Rappads on a "Kamakazi Mission" wit No Victims He's nuthin But "Self-Destruction"/

Ur Done:

Get the fuck out this website man "Fly Away" and "Dispatch".....Rappads trash and wouldnt "Ignite" if he was Gasoline nursin a fuckin "Match"/

I've takin down Bigger bitches than You, Ill Delinquents? Fuck that Wack Crew........Punk you gun leave this battle wit ya "Balls Shrunk" like Chasin Galons a "Mountain Dew"/
(ppl think Mountain dew shrinjks nuts, and ur crew IS WACK)

Dont fuck wit these lines and Ryhmes cuz they nuttin but Lyrically Devine.....Im like "Goosebump" Books I always send Chills up Lil bitches like yous Spines/

The Lines u spit were cheaper than Stand workers in Both Mexico and Accapoco.......Hah look at ya picture of Mike Myers wit a knife in the Window......bitch u got ova 100 posts its time to get a New Logo!/

Ya more "Useless" than "Mosqitoes" in this World so what purpose do you serve Here?.........You'll just be "run ova" like Campers on they way home in the Night Hittin undetected "Deers"/

Theres "no point" for ya ta ya rap like "flat surfaces".........Rappad couldnt come acrss tight lines if he was walkin on one in circuses/

Finisher:

U gota betta chance of Winnin than Mugsy Bogues Does tryin to Slam Dunk.....Ya Rep is sorta like "Much Music" illistratin No "Hip Hop" but "Straight Punk"/!
(Much has so much Punk on it)

^^props to ya man nice battle
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uppin....
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Flow-MOB
Punches-MOB
Multi's-MOB
Crativity-Both
Enjoyability-MOB

Overall-MOB

Basically MOB swept this battle with really good punches and the flow, I enjoyed readign his a little mro to, so vote goes to MOB.

Pretty decent battle but nothin really stood out....Breakdown like this

Punches - Tie
Vocab - Rap
Multi's - Rap
Wordplay - Mob
Metas - Mob
Personals - Rap

Vote = Rap

Ya'll drop a vote on my battle against SmokaJoka666 and GChand if U haven't already